Subtle Changes

A slow rain seems to speak
a language of its own
across the geometry of our city,
its subtle change
of tone heard everywhere-
in the way
despondent pigeons
begin to slump on windowsills;
in the shudder of black lampposts
as November's thunder
reverberates
in cool afternoon fog;
in shivers of leaves
bleeding from skeleton-trees
onto empty sidewalks;
in quiet sighs of October
drifting down the river-
in the silent ways we slowly
came to an end without goodbye.
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Posted: May 2010

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Ladybee42
i really like this as a poem - and it makes me feel for the planet in a way i'd rather not think of...moping good poem..applause
agoodguy2have
a subtle poem of loss of a relationship i feel. well done with cool but not dark feelings..."despondent pigeons begin to slump on windowsills" is very descriptive.
caroljoyce
Wonderful imagery, sad and evocative;I love 'shudder of black lampposts'
jazzy75
mmichaelm - nicely penned...i like your style :)
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