A slow rain seems to speak a language of its own across the geometry of our city, its subtle change of tone heard everywhere- in the way despondent pigeons begin to slump on windowsills; in the shudder of black lampposts as November's thunder reverberates in cool afternoon fog; in shivers of leaves bleeding from skeleton-trees onto empty sidewalks; in quiet sighs of October drifting down the river- in the silent ways we slowly came to an end without goodbye.
a subtle poem of loss of a relationship i feel. well done with cool but not dark feelings..."despondent pigeons begin to slump on windowsills" is very descriptive.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMay 10, 2010
Wonderful imagery, sad and evocative;I love 'shudder of black lampposts'
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