What is Haiku?

These few words I write
Are stripped as bare as Winter
Haiku poetry


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Posted: Feb 20

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EXRED3
I think dunno

2nd line miss the are to make the 7

last line needs another words to make the 5

????????

This may come to socrates attention and he would put you right.

I love this form of poetry and try hard myself too teddybear
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These (1) few (2) words (3) I (4) write (5) 5

Are (1) stripped (2) as (3) bare (4) as (5) Win (6) ter (7) 7

Hai (1) ku (2) poe (3) try (5) 5

Unless I'm doing Haiku wrong - I believe he has it perfectly right. Stripped to me pronounced as one. Good job LCBR! applause

Kathy
EXRED3
doh oops sorry but we are both just learning.

Good one Kathy teddybear
lovecanberealonline today!
Thanks for the comments, ladies..bouquet

I don't write a lot of haiku. I try to be sparing with it, like the haiku, itself...
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