by lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales, Australia
Feb 2022 350 Views 3 comments
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Comments (3)
2nd line miss the are to make the 7
last line needs another words to make the 5
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This may come to socrates attention and he would put you right.
I love this form of poetry and try hard myself too
Good one Kathy
I don't write a lot of haiku. I try to be sparing with it, like the haiku, itself...