Forever Love

Fresh as a flower
Love that doesn’t fade with time
Blowing in the wind
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Posted: Mar 2022
About this poem:
Experimenting a little more with Haiku (nature) versus Senryu (feelings) .....5-7-5 format. Using a very structured format when writing poetry often helps to create such creativity and emphasis on words denoting feelings......amazing how descriptive language becomes....like music almost following conventions.

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Yankee4you
I meant to say comparing imagery (nature) versus feelings (emotions)
EXRED3
Yes that is true i have found out. I love it i see a scene it affects deep inside and when home try to portray my emotions thumbs up
southmiami4321online today!
Very nice Yanque, perfect timing. SM
lilygold76
You write so beautifully...concise but comprehensive.teddybear thumbs up
salamuna
cute haiku Chris.. reminds me a flower growing out of a stone..Lily wave
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