Empty house

Like a poison of the grim heart
that tastes of nectar sweet
struck down, a slow-death laden dart
to lose my core, my personal true beat

it was clear, your love was just a fake
since now you left me all alone
a soulless shell of a man your false love of me did make
knock knock, but no ones home
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Posted: May 2010

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Comments (2)

agoodguy2have
how old are you?...work the gift man.
caroljoyce
You look too young to be writing dark poems, that's my job.What an art form you make of it though, but it seems so unfair on you.
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