Light

a true goddess came and killed all of my despair
i was infinitely alpha, insignificatly small
of silent noise and sightless light
i took notice of none and all

when she came up to talk to me a god she did create
for everything was in my power, all living did i command
pure euphoria filled my core, there was none i could hate
but when she asked for the time i rememberd my broken watchs hand

despair filled me as she turned away, my feelings full of bane
i would never love like this again
my hearts tatters waved in the wind
but then i saw her freind
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
got tired of posting lost love and dark poems so thought up a silly ( sort of)love poem.

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Ladybee42
this is so great! thanks for sharing, the end, and onto the friend
such a bloke thing to do ..laugh laugh applause applause
agoodguy2have
great ending
jazzy75
lol...got a chuckle from me!laugh
caroljoyce
Good one Luke.Poetic irony.
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