It's impossible for me not to comment on this poem, impossible for me not to feel something I know from your words, a heartfelt poem that envokes an understanding in me, so, all I can say is, I understand, and it was well written too.
Respected Sweet CW Very nicely written. I read the poem throughly and come to know about your past. You're a Brave Lady tackled with all ups and downs.
thank you Dani, I am worried about her ... very worried about her.
Coming up to the end of her pregnancy I knew something wasn't right, she had a long difficult labor because of that something which was not right, 16hrs if not more.
she was brought into hospital by ambulance yesterday with pain, sent home in the evening with a pill.... had to be brought back in again today with worse pain but this time there keeping her in doing, tests scans are to be done.
d4nI314Planet Earth, Valencia SpainAug 11, 2022
Omg.. I remember you saying...
Btw good poem, very well written. I can also feel your pain.
Hi CelticWitch..what a wonderfull poem you ve created..it was long ago i ve really enjoyed reading a poem here. be it as angel or as person let thy will be done..let me fly
CW Its brilliant!! So much to take in and reflect on each word into each line and feel so much compassion. It sounds so familiar to life. Thank you....
Ms. Witch, two things. First tge poem is so well written, i read it over and over again. Second, what I gather is that life is full of burdens and sorrows, not only from our makings but others as well. The strength we need to survive all these tests and challenges are sometimes depleted and leave us spent and tired. But. Here's the best part, you're very strong. You're very formidable. You might take the beatings but not for long. You are tge epitome of a fighter. A very good fighter.
Stay tgat way. You're an inspiration to the down trodden. I'm so learning from you dear Ms. Witch.
Respected Honorable Sweet CW You took me wrong. I quote you comment in which you wrote man for me. I never say anything bad. If you're hurt. Please forgive me. Stay Happy Healthy and Blessed. Ameen
YGR33La habana, Greater La Havana CubaAug 14, 2022
Your poem is very beautiful, honestly I liked it a lot and I congratulate you.
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Sweet CW
Very nicely written.
I read the poem throughly and come to know about your past.
You're a Brave Lady tackled with all ups and downs.
Now you're seasoned and enjoy the rest of life.
tah also for the compliment
When it comes to bravery aren't we all, having said that, bravery and being strong are not always such a good thing .... depending of course.
For you dear man
but maybe throw some of those good positive vibes of yours my way, but this time not for me but my daughter instead.
Instead of being home caring for her new baby daughter, she's wired up in hospital at the moment.
I know YOU so thank you in advance
So sorry to hear about that.
Sending good vibes your way dear sweet lady.
Coming up to the end of her pregnancy I knew something wasn't right, she had a long difficult labor because of that something which was not right, 16hrs if not more.
she was brought into hospital by ambulance yesterday with pain, sent home in the evening with a pill.... had to be brought back in again today with worse pain but this time there keeping her in doing, tests scans are to be done.
Btw good poem, very well written. I can also feel your pain.
be it as angel or as person
let thy will be done..let me fly
Loved it a lot
Greetings from NL,
Lily
know, the poem is not as dark as it may seem.
Gratitude comes in many shapes and forms, like so with other emotions.
such a compliment coming from a poet as good as yourself....
I am truly honored.
Thank you kindly
Second, what I gather is that life is full of burdens and sorrows, not only from our makings but others as well. The strength we need to survive all these tests and challenges are sometimes depleted and leave us spent and tired. But. Here's the best part, you're very strong. You're very formidable. You might take the beatings but not for long. You are tge epitome of a fighter. A very good fighter.
Stay tgat way. You're an inspiration to the down trodden. I'm so learning from you dear Ms. Witch.
I'll mail you about your daughter's situation.
Keep standing str.
Sweet Dearest CW.
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(Sweet kind Timo ?
When it comes to bravery aren't we all, having said that, bravery and being strong are not always such a good thing .... depending of course.
For you dear man.)
When one fight with ups and down.
He became Brave and Strong.
You're also right it alsi depend on circumstances.
Stay Happy Healthy and Barve..
This coming from you is what I call brilliant
Tis I that learns from you
But rather than fight about it, me thinks we learn from each other...
don't we all.
Thank you kindly for such a compliment
I know I may have a haircut like a boy but less of you calling me a man
Take care now I don't lift you by the ears and hang you out on the line
lol
Sweet CW
You took me wrong.
I quote you comment in which you wrote man for me.
I never say anything bad.
If you're hurt. Please forgive me.
Stay Happy Healthy and Blessed. Ameen