Sudden Awakening

It’s that time of morning
when you abruptly
feel yourself being pushed
out the door of a dream,
hearing the solid clack of the lock
behind you.

You know the dream-
the one where you’re flying
in a free fall after skydiving
from the moon’s diamond landscape
sacrificing your body to sunset,
and just before you hit the ground

the beautiful stranger
catches you in her arms,
unfolding herself slowly to you
like a flower blooming
in time-lapse photography…

and then without warning
you’re on the doorstep
in the dark morning mist
ringing the bell,
rapping the gilded doorknocker,
frantically searching
your pockets for the key.
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Poetry Magazine actually published this a few years ago. Go figure. LOL

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opentuit
"sacrificing your body to sunset"
Oh, Michael-- I love it!
thumbs up thumbs up
agoodguy2have
congrats on the publish...what i wanna know is...did she open the door?
NeverEndingStory
I know of those dreams with the beautiful stranger but it's never as I imagine it lol. Fantastic poem thanks for sharing teddybear
paloma66
Beautiful poem,nice thoughts.
Happygolucky4u
Very nice and exciting read. Many times I have found myself at the point of "It’s that time of morning
when you abruptly
feel yourself being pushed
out the door of a dream" Sometimes dreams are so sweetsmitten
jazzy75
mmichaelm - what a wonderful way of putting this...there are all types of awakenings :) nicely done!
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