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big bang brain

i need my space
i need my time
to expand my thoughts
to the outer reaches

shoulder to quarks
nose to nuclei
eye to photons
can't stretch my mind

crammed tight into me
no space to think
to peacefully be
so i close my eyes

blow the world away
and drift in cosmic
dreams and curves
traveling light-like

beyond the known edge
where i can't see
what's right there
touching my mind, me

© agoodguy2have 2010-05-19
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Posted: May 2010
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freeatlast64847
Cool! Yeah, you have to step outside the universe to get a good look at it. I like the parallel between molecules and galaxies, (if i interpreted that correctly grin ), that's a concept I've often entertained myself. Anyway, liked the poem. thumbs up
hedistuffonline today!
stop touching yourself! big bang brain...big bang brain? haven't you got something that perhaps...you should be doing? think about baseball or something like that...that's what I do....who played second base for the Washington Senators most of 1959?... that kinda stuff.......or maybe get a mirror..what's a photon?
mmichaelm
Cool thinking stuff, poet. Outstanding work. If you haven't already, you should get some of your work published. Great style.
Ladybee42
i love it, i like physics.. so i get it.. thanks for posting..applause applause
trurorobonline today!
are you transmogrifying Dave??, nice write
rob
Pinkpoetress
GoodGuy,
I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Blacksttud40
agoodguy.... this is very interesting.....
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Although we do tend to get caught up in the minutia of everyday life, it is nice when we can close my eyes blow the world away and drift in cosmic dreams. Thank you for taking us beyond the known edge...
caroljoyce
Amazed, got me faced, brain transcends mundane, knows what it will gain...
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - have a safe journey! wave cool write!!
Kacey_01
'...blow the world away
and drift in cosmic
dreams and curves
traveling light-like...'

My favourite part.

Do take us with you GG next time just incase lol, are you still here in our mucky lesser truth i wonder now grin Light-like is good here i thought (and therfore i am, though i prefer i feel therfore i am now).
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