and then....and then?....does it become difficult, if not impossible, to call to mind that, perhaps, lone memory of redemption?...of normalcy...of cause to go on...something other than the horrid nightmare of which there is no escape, conscious or no?...nice write michael...
Hi, mmichaelm, like stars just short of heaven...poignant...ending with injured ghosts in the dark. Your poem paints a compelling picture of Insomnia. Thank you for sharing.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMay 21, 2010
I liked this, thanks.
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAMay 22, 2010
Very nice...in the black pool of morning[/i...a fellow insomniac...or drifter of the night as I prefer to call myself...GREAT poem!
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rob
like stars just short of heaven...poignant...ending with injured ghosts in the dark. Your poem paints a compelling picture of Insomnia. Thank you for sharing.