There's No Always In Forever..

Not even going to say that I'm not sad
The time we spent together was the best I ever had.
I still feel your kisses ,I still feel your touch..
Yeh im gonna miss you, gonna miss you oh so much
Not even going to say, that i wont cry..
If i said I didn't still want you, well it'd be a lie,
But life goes on.. and baby so must we.
Guess that some things ,well they just arent meant to be.
Because there's no always in forever
And theres no solace in goodbye,
You cant stop the rain from falling down...
Even the roses have to die
And there's no happily ever after,
Not for most of us anyway..
And wishing upon the first star you see at night,
Is just not going to make them stay
So just go on,and move forward..
Try and move on..
And be thankful for the time that you had
Even though it's gone..
And though it seems that your whole world is falling apart...
Some day you'll look back on it without a broken heart..
Because there's no always in Forever..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I originally wrote this as a song, but alas I can't write music.. so although I have it in my head.. lol..

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Comments (34)

jeff99
would have been a nice song
QuietStormF
Thanks.. and I am sure it will be someday, once I find the music that jives in my head to go with it.. wine
Bentlee
Heart filled words, i like that, cheers Q S. :)
shootingstar77
Been there , done it. Very well written.

Roses may die, but spring always comes again , with the hope of new growth and life.

May roses always bloom , amidst the thorns that teach.
QuietStormF
Thank-you so much for your nice comments ShootingStar much appreciated..teddybear
shhores
yes, someday...thumbs up
gypsyheart
I can really find a piece of my own soul in your poem QuietStorm...beautiful words & very well written as with all your other poemshug
QuietStormF
time is the greatest healer shorres..thumbs up
QuietStormF
Thanks Gypsyheart.. something we all have experienced..teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks for your kind words Poetengineer.. always appreciated.. teddybear
boyshchrm6
There is no always in forever especially when Forever hasn't
happened yet!! blues
QuietStormF
Well.. yeh you got me there.....hmmm pointing teddybear
handsonesam
nice poem as wealways see ur nice and expressing poems
very good
keepgoingbouquet handshake handshake
QuietStormF
Thanks... for your commente Handsoneone.. hug
andrew149
so true for most of us, so well written for all af us, thankyou QSF, Andrew.....xxx
QuietStormF
Thanks Andrew for your insightful comments..bouquet
fareaway
thankyou for this beautiful poem..
touched me so intensely.
great work!
comfort teddybear bouquet
sshore
i feel your words inside
quiet storm
thankyou my friend
bless you
love this poem..teddybear bouquet bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks so much Shorres... and so glad that you are back! Missed reading your poetry...hug
QuietStormF
Thank- u for your comments boyshchrm6.. Tomorrow may not have happened yet.. but I think we all.. ok not all of us but we do have a fear of surrendering our hearts.. and the fear that if we do.. we sre giving the other person that power over us.. Ya know? Surrending half a heart... sad but true.teddybear
angel2311
This one I didn't notice before,it is as pretty as a song,and a bit sad too. but I love it.applause peace wine teddybear cheers
MyKey
Can't think of any words to describe how I feel. I just simply love it.
QuietStormF
Thanks Angel.. glad that you like this one.. it is one of the first that I posted in the poetry corner... teddybear
freeatlast64847
Great write! Timeless thoughts well spoken! wine
Macduff5
Just read your poem/song lyric and all I can say is so true, so true.
QuietStormF
Thank-you Mykee.. I am so glad that you liked it.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Free... glad you liked my poem.. teddybear
HotrodLarrys
This was an Extreemely Good write....

It was one of the Best poems I have read for a long Time...


It Spoke Of Reality so plainly,
It showed a deep heart
It showed Hurt
It showed that we must choose "So Wisely"
It Showed that Life has No Garantees
It Showed at times we must move on Despite the hurt....
It Showed Love
It Showed to Look ahead For Hope
a Future
Whenever that may be....

Very Good job...
Larry
QuietStormF
Thanks Larry;.
Maybe I should learn to listen a bit more cafefully... eh?teddybear
HotrodLarrys
We all make mistakes....

Thats How we Learn

Thats How we find maturity

That makes us see Life from a New Point of View

It Makes Us Grow

Thats How God Works!
QuietStormF
MAYBE I just wasn't listneing closely enough then.. eh? hmm... doh teddybear
Ladybee42
this is a great write - just like a song as you said quietstorm,
it just flows....thumbs up thumbs up
bouquet bouquet bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Ladybee... this one did come to me as a sort of song.. even when I read it now, I hear it as a song.. too bad I can't write music.. sigh Thanks again! teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks.. this one has a special meaning to me.. espeically now..teddybear
Q~S
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