Not even going to say that I'm not sad The time we spent together was the best I ever had. I still feel your kisses ,I still feel your touch.. Yeh im gonna miss you, gonna miss you oh so much Not even going to say, that i wont cry.. If i said I didn't still want you, well it'd be a lie, But life goes on.. and baby so must we. Guess that some things ,well they just arent meant to be. Because there's no always in forever And theres no solace in goodbye, You cant stop the rain from falling down... Even the roses have to die And there's no happily ever after, Not for most of us anyway.. And wishing upon the first star you see at night, Is just not going to make them stay So just go on,and move forward.. Try and move on.. And be thankful for the time that you had Even though it's gone.. And though it seems that your whole world is falling apart... Some day you'll look back on it without a broken heart.. Because there's no always in Forever..
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I originally wrote this as a song, but alas I can't write music.. so although I have it in my head.. lol..
Thank- u for your comments boyshchrm6.. Tomorrow may not have happened yet.. but I think we all.. ok not all of us but we do have a fear of surrendering our hearts.. and the fear that if we do.. we sre giving the other person that power over us.. Ya know? Surrending half a heart... sad but true.
angel2311Windsor, Ontario CanadaOct 5, 2010
This one I didn't notice before,it is as pretty as a song,and a bit sad too. but I love it.
MyKeyedmond, Oklahoma USAOct 5, 2010
Can't think of any words to describe how I feel. I just simply love it.
It was one of the Best poems I have read for a long Time...
It Spoke Of Reality so plainly, It showed a deep heart It showed Hurt It showed that we must choose "So Wisely" It Showed that Life has No Garantees It Showed at times we must move on Despite the hurt.... It Showed Love It Showed to Look ahead For Hope a Future Whenever that may be....
Thank-you Ladybee... this one did come to me as a sort of song.. even when I read it now, I hear it as a song.. too bad I can't write music.. Thanks again!
Comments (34)
Roses may die, but spring always comes again , with the hope of new growth and life.
May roses always bloom , amidst the thorns that teach.
happened yet!!
very good
keepgoing
touched me so intensely.
great work!
quiet storm
thankyou my friend
bless you
love this poem..
It was one of the Best poems I have read for a long Time...
It Spoke Of Reality so plainly,
It showed a deep heart
It showed Hurt
It showed that we must choose "So Wisely"
It Showed that Life has No Garantees
It Showed at times we must move on Despite the hurt....
It Showed Love
It Showed to Look ahead For Hope
a Future
Whenever that may be....
Very Good job...
Larry
Maybe I should learn to listen a bit more cafefully... eh?
Thats How we Learn
Thats How we find maturity
That makes us see Life from a New Point of View
It Makes Us Grow
Thats How God Works!
it just flows....
Q~S