When I look back

When I look back
The way I come
So many old friends beside me
Companied me,comforted me

When I look forward
The way not clear
Full of dense fog
Full of barriers on the way
Upset me, torture me.

When I look back
The way I come
How many left print there?
How many made your heart beating fast?
How many made you sad?
HOw many made you happy
How many made you shed tears?
How many made you laughing?

When I look back
oh.....
Complicated feelings
No words can express it exactly
.....
......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Just now, I reviewed those old threads I made before....when saw so many friends has left me...a little sad...I don't know when I will leave here but at least I can still sit here, post here and enjoy here....

The world is so large, The internet has so many websites, we met here, we chat here, we laugh here.... in CS,only CS,...I don't thing it's too far if I say this is lucky thing...maybe somebody don't like me and never think they are lucky to meet me here. But I really treasure all those who answered my post kindly...

Not easy...in Chinese we call this as "yuan"...Maybe we will never meet in person but we are here together, gathered together, speaking together....share our view together.....not easy...really need treasure it.......

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (7)

Amenda
Just want to say "hi, hope you happy always"........

to all internet friends who still be here and also who has left CS as well!




teddybear teddybear bouquet bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, Amenda,
Complicated feelings No words can express it exactly; yes, but, your poem does an excellent job! We continue looking forward, in spite of the dense fog, knowing that the future is where possibilities reside. All the gifts of past and present friends, woven into the fabric of our being, accompany us on our journeys. Thank you for sharing.
agoodguy2have
gnj beat me to it (she's a really early riser i think) but i wholeheartedly agree with her. i too am glad i stumbled on this space/place. it's a good way to meet good people, grow as poets, and as people. thanks Amenda.
jazzy75
Amenda - wonderful expression and connection....thank you :)
Amenda
Thank you all for the kind comments!teddybear bouquet


And thank God for giving me such a good stage to express out what in my bottom heart when it's full of feelings!
bowing bowing


teddybear teddybear teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Thank you so much for the gift of these wonderful wordsbouquet They opened my eyes where I could look at me. handshake I am glad you are here and share your words.
Amenda
Thanks a lot for the comments!teddybear bouquet teddybear
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate
We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here