When I look back The way I come So many old friends beside me Companied me,comforted me
When I look forward The way not clear Full of dense fog Full of barriers on the way Upset me, torture me.
When I look back The way I come How many left print there? How many made your heart beating fast? How many made you sad? HOw many made you happy How many made you shed tears? How many made you laughing?
When I look back oh..... Complicated feelings No words can express it exactly ..... ......
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Just now, I reviewed those old threads I made before....when saw so many friends has left me...a little sad...I don't know when I will leave here but at least I can still sit here, post here and enjoy here....
The world is so large, The internet has so many websites, we met here, we chat here, we laugh here.... in CS,only CS,...I don't thing it's too far if I say this is lucky thing...maybe somebody don't like me and never think they are lucky to meet me here. But I really treasure all those who answered my post kindly...
Not easy...in Chinese we call this as "yuan"...Maybe we will never meet in person but we are here together, gathered together, speaking together....share our view together.....not easy...really need treasure it.......
Hi, Amenda, Complicated feelings No words can express it exactly; yes, but, your poem does an excellent job! We continue looking forward, in spite of the dense fog, knowing that the future is where possibilities reside. All the gifts of past and present friends, woven into the fabric of our being, accompany us on our journeys. Thank you for sharing.
gnj beat me to it (she's a really early riser i think) but i wholeheartedly agree with her. i too am glad i stumbled on this space/place. it's a good way to meet good people, grow as poets, and as people. thanks Amenda.
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to all internet friends who still be here and also who has left CS as well!
Complicated feelings No words can express it exactly; yes, but, your poem does an excellent job! We continue looking forward, in spite of the dense fog, knowing that the future is where possibilities reside. All the gifts of past and present friends, woven into the fabric of our being, accompany us on our journeys. Thank you for sharing.
And thank God for giving me such a good stage to express out what in my bottom heart when it's full of feelings!