~a moment too . . . a lifetime~

~in a moment. . .
a slight glance happens. . . .
will they
have they
do they-connect. . . .

a quick ripple of thought soften's the eye's. . . .
a moment of chance.......
for two unaware
of thought those eyes share . . . .

what it'd be like fingers entwined
under the moon, beach, blanket an time. . . .
a walk to the market
a bike built for two . . . .

what's the other thinking

could it be you. . . .

that moment could it ever...............
become a lifetime~

~ Bentlee ~
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
:) it's about one of those times in life anywhere, you connect eye to eye, if only for a short time, there's something there!

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Comments (88)

QuietStormF
Very nice Bentlee,very soft and romantic..kiss Say, are you single by any chance?smitten
Bentlee
:) single and you?
QuietStormF
Single as well.. wine
Bentlee
Hmmm, do you like, pairs? :)
QuietStormF
Good luck in your search.. teddybear
Bentlee
Pairs, as in two. And off the tree, pears, to eat. :)
QuietStormF
I like pairs and I like pears too.. Now if the pair were me and you.. I would LOVE pairs... laugh lips
Bentlee
Pairs it is, wanna dance:) to that thought?
QuietStormF
*Takes your hand*Love to.. hug
Bentlee
Watch your toes, i'm all feet :) lol.
QuietStormF
Now you tell me.. Let's take that swim instead.. wink wine
Bentlee
Sp. . . . . Lash . . . . !
Bentlee
Sp. . . . . . . . . Lash . . . . .
sabeel
hi, bentlee,
well done.
i like your poem. in all means its working properly
, good luck.
applause
sabeel.
Bentlee
Hi Sabeel ty, it's real life in a moment's glance, it happens, yes in the real world. Wishing you well:)
Bentlee
ty for all your reading, i'm hoping my words found their way to you. :)
Bentlee
i feel blessed i've been able to share words with all who've read. Thank you :)
gypsyheart
Wow what a romantic soul!!I love this poem.Whoever she will be...she'll be a lucky lady!thumbs up
Bentlee
One day we'll enter each other's life, when, where, why's not matter, it'll be then that the four leaf clover'll come out. :) lol
Bentlee
A very quiet friend in my life, helped me to write the words:)
QuietStormF
You wrote them just fine all by yourself.. teddybear
Bentlee
All poems derive from an outside influence, be it good or bad, the influence lives:)
QuietStormF
Well I'm hoping was a good influence.. I actually saw a bicycle built for two.. down the street today.. made me think of this poem.. teddybear
QuietStormF
In fact belive it or not.. I just saw it again.. laugh
dimapur2009
Good poem bentlee, it touchs,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wave
QuietStormF
It is a great poem.. I'll second that....cheering
andrew149
Wow Bentlee,
You are prolific,
Giant among mere mortals,
Such as we!
I do enjoy reading some of your stuff, keep it coming, all the best, Andrew149.
Bentlee
Wow, i'm touched by such reply, thank you all for your kind words and genuine comments:)
Bentlee
Ty Dimapur, nothing wrong with some good roamance shared. glad you liked it .
Bentlee
Andrew, now how does one reply to that lol. Thanks i'm glad you like my work, it's cool how ideas from one person can spark an idea to another cheers:)
QuietStormF
You've lit a lot of flames.. it would seem.. Thanks for making it all happen.. Poetry is the language that can turn the world around.. I know sappy.. but it's great.. in't it? teddybear
Bentlee
Ty Q S i believe ur right with that thought. It somehow brings a person to a place thats theirs to share:)
QuietStormF
Well it's August now and that was June.. hmmm..
Bentlee
I've always believed in grabbing the bull by the horns, maybe sometimes those horns are not ready to be grabbed:)
QuietStormF
final answer?
QuietStormF
You can call a friend.......cheering
Bentlee
That would depend on who need's the life lines:)
QuietStormF
Oh well bbbzzzzzzzzzz..... too late sorry Bentlee.......but you get a great consolation prize for being such a sport! teddybear
QuietStormF
Not even curious about what you have won? Take a look behind door number 3!
Bentlee
Lol door number three, hell sounds like an game show from the seven . . . . tee's :)
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