The fire
Late at night,
By candle light,
My writings caught fire,
It gave me a fright,
I awoke in a crazed half drunken daze,
Staring at flames burning page after page,
The blaze was amazing but it didnt phase me,
I watched it for maybe a minute or two,
Unsure exactly of what I should do,
Call it a game and say "I am through"?
The longer I waited the more the flame grew,
Its true at the end we all must face death,
But I'm not going out like that...not yet,
Half boredom half regret,
The yellow-orange glow gorgeous like a sunset,
I extinguished the blaze,
like a cigarette in an ash tray...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
I lost two books of my writings,a chair,my drapes, and some carpet...
Comments (12)
rob
glad you woke up in time, you got lucky madtat..
Great lead for a intense poem by it's self!
Love that line, only not in a literal sense as you've used it, but more of a figurative meaning of 'powerful, moving, ALIVE!'
I want to write a poem with such intensity that it's effect upon the reader leaves them feeling rather 'scorched'!
I sooooo enjoyed! and, knowing you were alive to read this!...lol
"phase of glowing embers"
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