Off cliff

by Unknown

Jun 2010 747 Views 13 comments

Off the cliff.

Author: Unknown

It's different.
I don't know what i feel.
Like a safety net in place.
So scared...
but he catches me.
He's watching me...
See's me,
like the one I lost.
I feel connected,
my hearts breaking.
I want so much.

Its different.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2010

About this poem:

well I'm obviously seriously unbalanced... ;)

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Comments (13)

Proudamerican100Somewhere, California USAJun 9, 2010

What an exciting poem."I don't know what i feel.
Like a safety net in place." Sometimes a safety net is nice. Thank you for sharing.

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAJun 10, 2010

unbalanced or ...unsure or...hopeful or...free falling

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAJun 10, 2010

wow...tomboygirl's feelin sumpin'.....

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusJun 10, 2010

Thank You proudamerican,for the sweet comments,and for reading.

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusJun 10, 2010

Agoodguy,hedistuff,what can i say...i am one confused chick!

Thanks for reading guys

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 10, 2010

My type of poem, wierdly wonderful

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJun 10, 2010

Very good write.

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusJun 10, 2010

Thankyou redix

and thankyou carolj

desertshoresiowa city, Iowa USAJun 10, 2010

balance is over rated; reminds me of a poem i wrote once called: now i know. (or something like that)

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusJun 11, 2010

I'd like to read that desert,can you fish it out and post it?

desertshoresiowa city, Iowa USAJun 11, 2010

well i already did that with another one on here; i think its over kill to do the same thing twice! and actually its too old (this one) dont think i could find it. but thanks for asking. and then again my memory could be faulty as well!!