I dream of love but wake up with nothing I think of something they say nothing. I desire it bad and it drives me mad. I pray for hope that I no longer need to be a joke, so I'm not a man of your dreams but I know that I'm real, when I know I can feel. So don't act like you dont see me I'm not a Ghost I'm not even dead, I think and feel like most.
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
I just wrote how I feel about this world and how hard it is to find real love, when most people these days are so shallow to even know what love is all about.
I read your poem and felt sad, Maybe its my age but I think there is loads in life to love, not JUST people, people come along inbetween. I wish you well
EmilSkracic: you tell true feelings that many, if not all have felt. you're not alone, which of course leaves crazy. Nope, don't believe you're crazy either. Just searching. A heartfelt write, keep it up. ;-)
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJun 15, 2010
Come on now, they are not shallow, they are just young souls.You will meet the other half of your soul eventually but only when you are sufficiently experienced to handle it. Try and learn unconditionality, not to expect anything back. I know it is hard.
Thanx, hope to find a soul mate out there but I'm gonna try and learn to live a single life. Meditation should help me with this.
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKJun 16, 2010
I'm crazy and alone Sorry just trying to make you smile, nice write. You'll find your ideal partner when you are at one with yourself. Meditation is a good way, take care
I agree that I totally need to be at one with myself.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJun 16, 2010
NES is right.Two bewildered troubled souls cannot become one whole, mended one; instead, they will just give eachother a hard time. You need to balance your ying and yang and get a good perpective of youself and not be too needy. Meditation will help.
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