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warm front

In the early morning, early summer
before hydrogen bakes all the time.

The temperature is perfectly weathered
and my billowing thoughts climb
cumulonimbus to stratospheres of
barely expressible joy as ideas,
anvil-like rise and begin drifting
state-to-state, across the plain.

My air is tempered and flowing warm
oceans of ideas and stirrings around,
the sky beyond is alive azure blue
to the Azores and arced to Carolina.

Breathless my wind makes no sound as
delight increases from the east
and flashes of inspiration cross
synapse to stratus and flashing back.

Storms beautiful and powerful slipstream
across my soul beckoning washing with
renewal and growth of my life below.

This front must surely pass another
direction but now the air is sweet to
taste and joyfully wets the lips.

© agoodguy2have 2010-06-18
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
Redex....this must be for you ;-)

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Earlgreytea
'Storms beautiful and powerful slipstream
across my soul beckoning washing with
renewal and growth of my life below', stunning imagery, thank you!!!
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Thank you for sharing flashes of inspiration cross synapse to stratus and flashing back. And, thanks, too, to Redex for inspiring such lovely verse. Look out for those thunderstorms!
caroljoyce
What a stunningly happy, beautiful poem; as gnj4u says, well done to Redex for the inspiration.
hedistuff
fresh air blowing in the wind comes a time of stormy weather. blue skies morning dew sunny afternoon deja vu, over and over again in the sunshine of my love...have you ever seen the rain comin' down a sunny day...nice write suffolk...
Redex
AH goodguy this was certainly no maiden flight, no air pockets in here. a picture came to mind , a strong tree in Autumn stripped of leaves and bare, and another in summer covered in leaves and blossom. Wonderful readteddybear
andrew149
Nice one GG2H, A lot of cloud cover, but still the sun is shining through...........Andrew.
Happygolucky4u
conversing Very nicely done.
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - and a wonderfully warm feeling to go with it!hug
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