by Unknown
Jun 2010 614 Views 8 comments
The Door
Let me in, I am knocking your door,
Heaven's wooden protection.
Passion holds my throat
Mind controls my actions.
I know it can control,
It did so for years.
It will not give me away
To searching eyes and ears.
Let me remove your fears.
Let me speak, I will mean every word
I will be with you, I will care
I'll spoil you and never stop
I'll gently inhale you
I'll slowly touch your skin
Feel you close for a tiny moment
I'll fly, I'll live my dream,
I'll take you above it
Let me in, I am knocking your door,
Heaven's wooden protection.
Passion holds my throat
Mind controls my actions.
Heaven's wooden protection.
Passion holds my throat
Mind controls my actions.
I know it can control,
It did so for years.
It will not give me away
To searching eyes and ears.
Let me remove your fears.
Let me speak, I will mean every word
I will be with you, I will care
I'll spoil you and never stop
I'll gently inhale you
I'll slowly touch your skin
Feel you close for a tiny moment
I'll fly, I'll live my dream,
I'll take you above it
Let me in, I am knocking your door,
Heaven's wooden protection.
Passion holds my throat
Mind controls my actions.
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Posted: Jun 2010
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Comments (8)
In the midst of passion v. mind, love can open doors To searching eyes and ears. The placement of Let me remove your fears separate as its own stanza is very effective. Thank you for sharing.
Glad that you read it :-)
thank you very very much for your comments! Glad you liked it!
Either I did not understand your comments, or I did not express a thought clear in a poem
I know it can control,
It did so for years.
It will not give me away
To searching eyes and ears.
Does it look like love opens a door for searching eyes and ears?