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--Cell Mate--

if I ask
do you think I'm pretty?
you say, of course
of course, dear, you're beautiful
and you act
so surprised
that I could even think it
that I could ever wonder
but I know --
I know that you're lying.
you're lying to me.
you think I'm ugly
and mean
and stupid
and you wish hard
that you could escape.
but you're just a prisoner
just like me
and we always
brush against each other in the hall
and shrink away
because there's nothing we can do
there's nothing but
being lonely
and being stuck
either of us thinking about
how the other's so ugly
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
Yep. Lengthy. Wordsy. Completely average and unexceptional. I love it.

I'm so done. Does anyone else get stupid at 4 in the morning? :)

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agoodguy2have
sounds like a relationship in need of ... something.
19chellebelle90
Goodguy -- it is a relationship that lacks ... everything that defines a functional relationship.

Rob -- thank you so much :) I'm glad you like it!!
andrew149
Thankyou chellebelle, Yep, 4 in the morning is good, so is every other "Silly o'clock", when you have something you just HAVE to write.....lol.....Welcome to the corner.......Andrew......xxx
19chellebelle90
Thanks Andrew!! :)
gnj4u
Hi, 19chellebelle90,
Yes, two people locked in as cell-mates of a relationship is true loneliness; whereas, a good relationship leaves someone feeling, not just hearing, they are beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
19chellebelle90
thanks hon :)
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