A Poem Written From Tears

May be you think I m happy
When I smile effort-fully
as I cant wail
though the loneliness strike me.


Thank you
for visiting my soul
through a poem
which I m writing from tears.


I know you love only my poems
But, you don't love me
According to the norm...
'many people loves the moon
but, no one to love the sky'


But, hopefully I'll think
at least a star will arise one day
to love the sky
constantly and sincerely.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
another poem of mine.

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Happygolucky4uonline now!
Kind of sad. But it was a nice read.conversing I love the sky. I think it is really cool with all the clouds and stuff for decorationbouquet
agoodguy2have
hey Blacksttud40: I too love you, sky, as a fellow member of the human race, and fellow poet. hang through the dark times and you'll make it into brighter days.
Blacksttud40
Happygolucky.. its very glad to know that you are there to 'love the sky'.... in the same time another thing is happening .. you become a star... if you love the 'sky'...ha ha finally my heartfelt welcome.. and thanks....
trurorob
emotional write
rob
Redex
Your poem I loved and was moved, your expression in second verse was a beautiful way of writing thankyou for sharinghandshake
Blacksttud40
Hi..paloma66...,

As a woman who got a beautiful mind and especially a woman from neighboring India which presented a lot to my culture.. I love you very much.. your encouraging comments are admirable always...
honeybemine
Hi Blackstudd40
Didn't ur destiny return yet?
Why all the sadness?
Life is too short, my friend.
Approach her and give her a piece of ur mind.
Come on, she can only say yes or no, no buts.
chrissie65
Beautiful, you write from your heart and my heart agrees. Take care
Blacksttud40
agoodguy2have... you are a real human being ... I love you and god bless you...

hug
Blacksttud40
trurorob...

Thank you ... Thank you very much. handshake
Blacksttud40
Redex........ Thank you for valuable comments.

handshake
Blacksttud40
honeybemine...,

Thanks a lot to you for your valuable comments.bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
jazzy75
Blacksttud40 - a heartfelt write...always on the lookout for that star.angel2
Blacksttud40
chrissie65 ... heart felt welcome your comments....Thank you...hug
Blacksttud40
jazzy75...

Ok.. I ll wait for star ... thank you jazzy. I know you are a kind hearted good woman . ...

comfort
caroljoyce
Oh we do love you, here is a hughug hug Better now? You are not alone, you only have the illusion.
sophiasummer
Thank you
for visiting my soul
through a poem
which I m writing from tears.


sweetman, if one loves your poems through you soul, then your soul they love as well.
beautiful deep writebouquet angel
Blacksttud40
caroljoyce ..,

Thank you very much... your affectionate comments may give me a real courage...

hug
Blacksttud40
sophiasummer ..

I feel so glad about you... kindness is a invaluable ornament for a woman. But its rare to see continually with women .. you are inherited that rare quality..
Blacksttud40
Thank you all for encouraging comments.... I love you all....
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