Oh morning breeze, You gentle tease, How delightfully sweet you are. You've lifted me, to heights of fantasy, I feel as though, I could soar.
But here I sit, so lazily dreaming, caressed in your cool loving arms. A most willing prisoner, Held captive, by your charms.
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I wrote this poem, under the blissful spell of a cool breeze, on a beautiful spring day ! Some people call it Spring fever, and I don't know why ? I was feelin' really COOL !
hi, aware3, best work, its better to feel along with nature. bcuz nature gives us all. a good poet can observe nature deeply and write about it. poets will express all feelings. all the best. SABEEL.
shhoresHYDERABAD, Telangana IndiaAug 13, 2009
its so concisely worded with such beauty of expression.
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 13, 2009
really true express for something u feel , it is nice one , thanks for share
habs360San Jose, California USAAug 13, 2009
I really like this one.
aware3OPnavarre, Florida USASep 24, 2009
Thanks Hobs, 4 ur comments ! Blessings, aware3
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 25, 2009
Comments (6)
best work,
its better to feel along with nature.
bcuz nature gives us all.
a good poet can observe nature deeply and write about it.
poets will express all feelings.
all the best.
SABEEL.