Hi, freeatlast64847, Fortunately, It's almost as if I were wired, My fingers just speaking my mind doesn't need mixing to happen. I read the 3rd stanza as a metaphor for life. Thank you for sharing.
they fell through the keyboard and sped far from home so you on missouri might write this smart poem.. tadaaa!...nicely done..
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 6, 2010
Mixing poetry with alcohol, brave man. I would never dare as I am nutty enough without it.Can't even imagine what would come out; probably Mrs Fledgler tries the Karma Sutra! UUUHG!
freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAJul 6, 2010
Thanks awake, gnj and Ladybee! caroljoyce, I get ideas with a glass or two of wine in me, but most of the actual writing takes place the next day... The Kama Sutra thing sounds interesting though, who's Mrs Fledgler?
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 6, 2010
ER... some of my wacky writes, can't call it poetry to be realistic, see Mrs Fledgler, the Funeral under my poetry. Not really for the love lorn, need to put her somewhere else really rather than here. Hedi likes her though. Maybe better have a glass or two first perhaps.
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Fortunately, It's almost as if I were wired, My fingers just speaking my mind doesn't need mixing to happen. I read the 3rd stanza as a metaphor for life. Thank you for sharing.
they fell through the keyboard
and sped far from home
so you on missouri
might write this smart poem..
tadaaa!...nicely done..
UUUHG!
Now tell me please, which way's the bar?