Dance

by Unknown

Jul 2010 397 Views 8 comments

Dance

Author: Unknown

Captivated in a trance,
eyes shut tight, provoking a sense of solitude,
Detachment from my feathery limbs,
carrying themselves lightly on reverberating waves,
Surrounding me,
impregnating me with magnetic energies of symphonic sounds,
Pulling my strings,
composing my poise,
manipulating curvacious stance,
I surrender,
rendering my embodiment

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Posted: Jul 2010

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Comments (8)

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAJul 8, 2010

dance! anjalii dance! ...very elegantly composed.

sophiasummerNorthland, New ZealandJul 8, 2010

eyes shut tight, provoking a sense of solitude,

keep that spirit glowing anjalii,
it shines in how you write.

anjaliiOPcork, Cork IrelandJul 8, 2010

Thank you both for your lovely comments.
This is a first for me so the feedback means a lot x

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAJul 8, 2010

very nice...I drifted thru a soothing rock-a-bye...

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAJul 8, 2010

hello there anjalii - welcome to poetry madness.com
you've shared some very nice poetry with us and i hope you will share some more, it's lovely and light, almost summer poetry..thanks..

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 9, 2010

An amazing, stunning piece of work; beautiful imagery. It took me by surprise.

SamFalconManila, Metro Manila PhilippinesJul 11, 2010

WOW...I was totally captivated. The only thing was it left me wanting more...so I hope more will indeed follow. Anjalii you are such a impressive talent and I am very impressed with your creativity...I appreciate that very much. Thanks for the inspiration...I usually don't dance but it left wanting to.