You must have hung the moon tonight, Just so we could dine in her candle light.. and then dance beneath the magical sight, of a blanket of stars twinkling in delight.
The music courtesy of some sycamore trees, swaying gently in the breeze. We shared a kiss under the glance of an owl who cried "who " And then proceeded to dedicate the night to me and you..
The crickets eager to be in on the fun too, serenaded us the whole night through. And you pulled me close and then we were one, Much to the surprise, and red blush of the rising sun.
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
Just some silly thoughts I had while thinking of a special friend this afternoon.. :D
cricket's on the fiddle, moon's in the middle, afternoon thought's, at the start just a little, now's it's believe'n, now your words don't be leavin! :)
Thanks for your comments paloma66 I do hope that they never die.. sometimes we are lucky to meet someone along our journey who brings out the "romance" in us..
I never ever read all of the poemsin the poetry corner,but I have read everyone of yours and this poem is one of favorites. It takes me back when we were teenagers walking hand in hand in the moonlight on a beach and I can still hear the crickets join in on our fun. Your heart runs the whole gamut of feelings.
Thanks afternoon.. I think this is one of my favourites I have written also.. ... it was fun to write and just kind of came to me, as I sat outside by the pool on a sunny summer day... daydreaming..
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaFeb 21, 2012
Thank=you... 2012.. I am glad that you liked my poem... My muse has been quite aloof since I wrote this one.. but hoping that he/she will come back real soon.... Thanks again!
Comments (41)
Stay with me, at least till dawn's early light.
the day that I met you
mighty thirst quenched
long hunger sated
my darkened journey through
hardened crust which held my heart
merely melted under your gaze
pain but a memory
tears only of joy
passionate love is now all days
thankyou for sharing
quietstorm
That's CUTE
Nice poem.
Once again your tender,sensitive
and romantic side shining thru.
I love this romantic, beautiful poem. It took me away and made me remember romance again. Thank you!
beautiful majic in your words.
Quietstorm
It takes me back when we were teenagers walking hand in hand in the moonlight on a beach and I can still hear the crickets join in on our fun.
Your heart runs the whole gamut of feelings.