A Night Made For Us Two...

You must have hung the moon tonight,
Just so we could dine in her candle light..
and then dance beneath the magical sight,
of a blanket of stars twinkling in delight.

The music courtesy of some sycamore trees,
swaying gently in the breeze.
We shared a kiss under the glance of an owl who cried "who "
And then proceeded to dedicate the night to me and you..

The crickets eager to be in on the fun too,
serenaded us the whole night through.
And you pulled me close and then we were one,
Much to the surprise, and red blush of the rising sun.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
Just some silly thoughts I had while thinking of a special friend this afternoon.. :D

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Comments (41)

Bentlee
cricket's on the fiddle, moon's in the middle, afternoon thought's, at the start just a little, now's it's believe'n, now your words don't be leavin! :)
QuietStormF
It was magical hearing your voice tonight..
Stay with me, at least till dawn's early light.
Bentlee
dawn's early light, blankets pulled tight, shade's keep it night, only birds takin flight,
QuietStormF
Write one for me.. bouquet
poetengineer
really beautiful words express ur sweet line of your writing,as always u write in great way , i enjoy read it , thanks for share
QuietStormF
Thanks Poetengineer You're a sweetheart teddybear
hedistuff
all things of wonder were placed unto me
the day that I met you
mighty thirst quenched
long hunger sated
my darkened journey through

hardened crust which held my heart
merely melted under your gaze
pain but a memory
tears only of joy
passionate love is now all days
QuietStormF
Thank-you Sablee.. I'm glad you liked.. teddybear
QuietStormF
I like it Hedistuff.. and that is what we strive for.. not just for the day.. or night.. teddybear
Bentlee
One of my favourites:)
andrew149
Beatiful poem, well written good thoughts, QSF, saw your comment on bottom, in my view, nothing "Silly" about them...Kindest regards......xxx
gypsyheart
Beautiful and sensitive love poem QS...just like you arehug
QuietStormF
Thanks Bentlee.. it is one of mine too....bouquet
QuietStormF
Than-you Andrew.. The poem is silly, but fun...teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Gypsyheart.. blushing hug
QuietStormF
Thanks for your comments Stareintopsace....Never thought of it that way.. but hmmm yeh.. teddybear
shhores
this is so very beautiful
thankyou for sharing
quietstormbouquet teddybear gift
nash_node
We shared a kiss under the glance of an owl who cried "who "


That's CUTE smitten

Nice poem.
QuietStormF
Thanks Nash Node.. Silly cute poem.. teddybear
boyshchrm6
Far from foolish thoughts QS.
Once again your tender,sensitive
and romantic side shining thru.
angel applause thumbs up hug
QuietStormF
Thank-you kindly for your sweet comments.. hug teddybear
angel2311
Oh I like this poem. It is just so, so adorable cheering applause teddybear Angel
QuietStormF
Thanks Angel.. adorable... I like it.. laugh teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Wow I am truly humbled.. laugh I do appreciate your words though, and thanks again ! hug teddybear bouquet
Pinkpoetress
QuietStorm,
I love this romantic, beautiful poem. It took me away and made me remember romance again. Thank you!
paloma66
This poem brought out the feelings in me,do they never die QS,you tug at the heart strings with your words....Thanksteddybear angel
QuietStormF
Thank-you Pinkpoetress.. I'm glad that you enjoyed ! teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks for your comments paloma66 I do hope that they never die.. sometimes we are lucky to meet someone along our journey who brings out the "romance" in us.. hug teddybear bouquet
boyshchrm6
Reread this QS. It is pure
beautiful majic in your words.angel applause hug
QuietStormF
Thanks again boyshchrm6 ... Summer magic.. yeh that's what it is ! laugh teddybear bouquet
Earlgreytea
Simply loved it!
QuietStormF
Thank-you so much for your comment.. Just a funone I wrote.. on a hot day last year back In August...teddybear


Quietstorm
purpledragonfly
I love this poem. It took me back to my early times when I was in love!!!banana
QuietStormF
Thank-you Purpledrangonfly.... I am so glad that I could bring you back to that place in life.. love is grand ain't it?hug teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Earlgreytea... had fun writing this one.. teddybear
afternoonextacy
I never ever read all of the poemsin the poetry corner,but I have read everyone of yours and this poem is one of favorites.
It takes me back when we were teenagers walking hand in hand in the moonlight on a beach and I can still hear the crickets join in on our fun.
Your heart runs the whole gamut of feelings.
QuietStormF
Thanks afternoon.. I think this is one of my favourites I have written also.. ... it was fun to write and just kind of came to me, as I sat outside by the pool on a sunny summer day... daydreaming.. hug
steve1223
A beautiful romantic write

hug
QuietStormF
Thank=you... 2012.. I am glad that you liked my poem... My muse has been quite aloof since I wrote this one.. but hoping that he/she will come back real soon.... Thanks again! teddybear teddybear teddybear
QuietStormF
sorry that was 12 23... thanks again for your comment..teddybear
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