WOW! Very, Very Nice! . . . You presented the love between this Couple SO well from beginning to end . . . Actually, for an Eternity even . . . Beyond Physical death . . I felt your words and pictured it all in my minds eye EASILY . . A GREAT READ! TOUCHING!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 10, 2010
What a wonderful verse, and showing deep love which comforts, memories treasured.
Hi, hedistuff, Endearing love, enduring love, eternal love...petals dropping all around us... dancing through the forest floor / eyes wide. Thank you for sharing this truly tender verse.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 10, 2010
Ahhhh you are an old softie and how we all love you.
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAJul 10, 2010
oh how we love love.. too often it has escaped us only recognizing it in our past painting rosy nostalgic pictures but the feeling still fills us should we be lucky
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAJul 10, 2010
Nice write hedi! A picture well painted. I guess we all have cherished memories that will stay with us a lifetime. Thanks for sharing this one, as I'm sure you brought happy thoughts to many with it.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 10, 2010
Not luck Hedi, 'tis design!
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 11, 2010
What a wonderful poem Hedi,what an intense love,creates a feeling of serenity,OMG! you are really so loving.Thank you for these lovely thoughts.Scher is the same.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJul 11, 2010
Hedi, You write such a loving poem. I can feel the emotions. Just wonderful the way you write. This was beautiful.
My goodness...what would the world do without a romantic guy like you. Keep on keepin` on. I do love the deep, deep sentiments, of all of the poems. - Hugs to you & Lyn. -your friend, Ness
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAOct 6, 2011
no...you haven't died. only grown stronger, as our love has. I love you baby...
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Young love was so pure, and honest wasn't it? Sometimes sad also to look back on the past...JG
Endearing love, enduring love, eternal love...petals dropping all around us... dancing through the forest floor / eyes wide. Thank you for sharing this truly tender verse.
too often it has escaped us
only recognizing it in our past
painting rosy nostalgic pictures
but the feeling still fills us
should we be lucky
You write such a loving poem. I can feel the emotions. Just wonderful the way you write. This was beautiful.