Monalisa, how talented you are..brought back many childhood memories for me too.I used to love mother may I?..but hide and seek was always a bit scary, I love the way you write..keep them coming my friend..JG..
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAJul 10, 2010
Nice one! Brought to my mind the old porch swing from my own youth. Thanks!
MLS4U: What great evocative lines. We all seem to have been there in our youth. "Children chasing glowing stars. To hold them tight in Mason jars." exactly describes it. 11 words, great! Thank you! (i seem to remember them as pickle jars though...;-)
Awww, Thank You All for your kind comments. . I'm really glad this one brings back fond memories for all of you . . and giggle, giggle on the pickle jar agoodguy . . I'm thinking your glowing stars were dill scented when you set them free . . . LOL
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 12, 2010
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To hold them tight in Mason jars." exactly describes it. 11 words, great! Thank you! (i seem to remember them as pickle jars though...;-)
and provokes feelings, well done You