Honey, I'm Feeling Lonely, Honey, I'm Feeling Blue

Hey there, Baby, I'm all alone now, the kids are tucked in bed.
When you left just a few days ago, I remember what you said.
You said, "Babe, I really love you, the time will go by fast.
Before you know it, I'll be back and the future will be the past.
So keep your chin up and hold the fort down, give the kids a kiss each day.
Tell them, I'll bring them back a special gift, from a land quite far away."
Well, I've tried to take these words to heart, but the time is going slow.
I know you think that I'm real strong, but there's something you don't know;
And that is,

Honey, I'm feeling lonely, Honey, I'm feeling blue.
I wish that you were here with me, or I were there with you,
But what can't be, can't be, me with you, you with me,
So take my love into your heart and hold it tenderly.

Well, now Baby, in the daytime, the loneliness hides away.
But when the sun goes down and the lights go out, that's the loneliest time of day.
I can't help but want you near me, your warm touch and gentle kiss,
The pillow talk that we'd have each night is what I mostly miss.
I overheard our children praying, saying bring my Daddy home.
So tonight I felt it right to just sit down and write this poem.
We can't wait for you to come home, it'll be a special day.
It seems to help to write it down, and to say what I have to say.
Except for tonight when,

Honey, I'm feeling lonely, Honey, I'm feeling blue.
I wish that you were here with me, or I were there with you,
But what can't be, can't be, me with you, you with me,
So take my love into your heart and hold it tenderly.

Please, God, Bring Them All Home Safely!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Dedicated To All Of Our Armed Forces Over Seas or Away From Home Fighting For Our Freedom, AND To Their Families Keeping The Home Fires Burning For Them. Whether or Not You Believe or DON'T Believe in this War, Our Men And Women are STILL CVER THERE Fighting for US All. NOT Their Fault, Just Their JOB! ICR2010

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Redex
My Goodness what a strong verse echoing all soldiers familys feelings. I wish this could be posted onto the lads fighting, and for their familys to read, its as you say inner feelings are kept there, but to see them in black and white can only help. Also make more people aware, what familys go through. Wonderful!!! teddybear
MonaLisaSmile4U
Why Thank You Red for your kind Comment . . . I Too Wish The Same . . . Be Blessed Always angel
agoodguy2have
Mona: This cries for music to go by...i can almost hear it, but that's not my strong point. It says well how the wives (and now husbands) feel, stuck at home, holdin' the fort down. thanks
freeatlast64847
I agree with goodguy, this could easily be a song. I echo your sentiments, MonaLisaSmile. Excellent poem! Here's a place where you can post a message to the troops:
gnj4u
Hi, MonaLisaSmile4U,
While I can only imagine what it is like for our military families, your marvelous poem paints a poignant picture that feels real. I echo your words, Please, God, Bring Them All Home Safely!
hedistuff
what a lovely story...and you rhyme so well...
MonaLisaSmile4U
Awwwwwww Thank You All . . and Thank you Free, for the link . . You're the best! . . My Son-in-law is Navy . . And I married Navy once. . It all hits close to home I think . . I just moved from Viginia Beach, VA(a Big Military Community) to Texas. teddybear
justmejohn
its beautiful at least some people still care wonderful write
Happygolucky4u
crying I really liked it. But it makes me sad to think of all those seperated from homebouquet
jerseygirl49
Dear monalisa...I sat here and really cried, remembering the feeling when I was married and living abroad, with a baby..and my ex was in the first gulf war.It was so tough..but we military wives are so strong...God Bless you sweety, and I hope you will be united soon.applause ...JG..hug heart wings angel2 rose
MonaLisaSmile4U
Awww bouquetThanks JG . . I'm not married to Navy anymore, but my Youngest daughter is . . Like you, I just remember confused when too, and decided to write that for all that are in that hard situation is all . . I also have married friends in the miliary . . but thank you and Thank God my Son-in-Law is on shore duty right now. However, He may be deployed soonsighangel
caroljoyce
I am singing along to that. Do post it to them and let it all end soon, now!
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