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when nobody notices love

when nobody notices love

what do we do
when a guy likes a girl
only to find
she likes
someone else
maybe love will
take pity on me

the music plays
a sad sweet refrain
i look at her
but she calls his name
both of us loose
what we want and
love passes again
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
times when we dont get the girl.

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Comments (7)

caroljoyce
More where that one came from, fella; good write.
SCatlyn
Awww, somebody eventually notices.... very sad, but wonderful writing bouquet bouquet bouquet
jeddah12
laugh SERPICO,GOODLUCK AGAIN FOR THE OTHER ONE,LOL.NICE WRITEcheers
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Well that is just sadcrying
serpico12
carol thank you so much for your words..

scatlyn..thanks to you also..nice comments

jeddah..thank you for your comments..all of you are just great like this..

happy ..sorry its a sad one...but it was ages ago..wine
cafetwo2010
Bitter sweet serpico.. Wendy scarred me for life when she left me for the kid sitting behind her just because he gave her a piece of bubble gum. We were in the third grade! lol. cafecheers
serpico12
yes school memories..ours was a boys school..now thats on way to start us kids off...mix us up..lol..
thanks for the comments...::thumbsup:
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