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So vividly I recall love's song she sang The gentle humming of the surf to my soul The majestic waves washing o're me gently Filling my heart with an ecstasy unbeknownst Sorrowfully now tis certain love's song is ended Disintegrated as surely as the rock to sand The once busily babbling waters Rushing swiflty down the stream Now merely a gaping dusty hole reminding me of a love that can never be That same old melody, haunting me taunting Echoing over and over again through my mind As I sink deeper and deeper into the abyss I in a futile attmept At some sort of recognizance Succumb to the only reminders of love lost The hollowness in my heart And the heady scent of lilac after a rain.
Wow! What beautiful prose from such deep feelings. Now to remember the humming surf, majestic waves, and the ecstasy. Forget the sorrow, the haunting, the hollowness, and what can never be. Know that what was once, can be again. It takes an open mind to open a heart to love again.
A very Nice poem, tho cast a shadow of a bewildered Heart, that seeks a place of Safety, From Battering Wolves, and Really Only Seeking, Her Own, Shelter from the rain, But he must prove Himself, instead of Decaying. Larry
angel2311Windsor, Ontario CanadaSep 15, 2009
I read your poem, Wow! Am I ever touched. Your words are an inspiration to my soul. Thank you so much for being so intringing. Thanxs for sharing your heart as always. You Rock!!!!!!
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 15, 2009
I like this one QSF, and thinking, one song needs to end, before another begins, like with the lilac, unwritten, but beautiful hope........thankyou.....Andrew.......xxx
Don't know how this one got by me QS. Just beautiful words, phrasing, flow and your usual sensitivity. Sorry for the pain this caused you.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 14, 2011
Love's Song Wonderful Q.Storm superb... thankyou for sharing an inspirational write hugss So vividly I recall loves song she sang The gentle humming of the surf to my soul The majestic waves washing o're me gently Filling my heart with an ecstasy unbeknownst Sorrowfully now tis certain love's song is ended Disintegrated as surely as the rock to sand
Why thank-you Boys.. actually this one just sort of jumped in my lap.. so to speak, was not written for or about anyone.. My muse was hard at work that day... :D
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 24, 2011
Comments (20)
better again..
nice words and good work.
is it a remainder for anyone?
SABEEL.
its just lovely..
Larry
Just beautiful words, phrasing, flow
and your usual sensitivity. Sorry for
the pain this caused you.
Wonderful Q.Storm superb...
thankyou for sharing an inspirational write hugss
So vividly I recall loves song she sang
The gentle humming of the surf to my soul
The majestic waves washing o're me gently
Filling my heart with an ecstasy unbeknownst
Sorrowfully now tis certain love's song is ended
Disintegrated as surely as the rock to sand
I wondered how I'd managed to miss this delightful poem, then I checked out the date ;-) A fine write well deserving of another viewing...
Best wishes
Bill
~QS~