Falling out of Love!

Unconditional love why so hard

I love you despite your scares

I love you for who you are

It's not your skin or hair

That makes me care

Your heart and soul is all I know

I don't see your imperfections

All is see is my perceptions

You grow away from me, there is on touch!

There is not even a moment's clutch

You despise yourself and your vanity rules

You copy the bitterness and traits of fools

My love for you was so special and true

But you could not accept my gift to you

Now I an crushed no more to give

It is all over now so sad we live
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Falling out of love, not growing together, no bitterness just sadness
A long time ago now so all is good.

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Comments (10)

Ladybee42
do men love unconditionally? we are led to believe otherwise...it's a little confusing at times..dunno
nice words BSG...thanks for posting.
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet
BoyseeksGirl
Yes most men are @##%#@!But there are many real men aboutfrustrated heart wings

I do appreciate your comments and I am still learning the skill of writinghug
MonaLisaSmile4U
applauseA Nice one Boy . . . Ahh, to find unconditional love in a man! . . What a wonderful dream! . . . And you are doing fine . . you put a lot of feeling in that piece teddybear angel
caroljoyce
Interesting write BSG. Don't puzzle too much over words,relax and let them come. Glad you are uncrushed.
agoodguy2have
we grow through all things of today, i grow from reading your words of love and loss.
BoyseeksGirl
Look at that my three best friends, I hope, thank you very muchgrin hug
Redex
I liked reading this, sad but better its not bitter,not many achieve that, meaning what they HAD is destroyed and made ugly.
All your writing has been great, we all try, and the reader takes
maybe a different picture, but its the writing!!
teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, BoyseeksGirl,
It's nice when someone truly "sees" you and not only accepts you but loves you for who you are. Sometimes the self has trouble with that unconditional love stuff, too. Thank you for sharing.
jerseygirl49
SO BEAUTIFULL!!!rose rose thanks daisy ..JG...wave wine
BoyseeksGirl
To my new friends I truly an grateful for your wonderful commentsblushing
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