LIFE'S A TRIP

I sit here in a darkened car,
With three small ones at my side,
All huddled in blankets escaping cold's spar.
Lack Of Money 's the train that we ride.

This train someday will halt its wheels.
A destination will come to pass.
Having boxes with more than just love for our meals,
And bags just full of faith in our grasp.

So in the tunnels of the deepest despair,
Three smiles appear to me.
All warmed with hope that can't compare,
This trip strengthens internally.

We play an imagination game,
And stories we tell out loud,
Of the future's treasures we soon will claim.
On departure, we'll stand right proud.

So when this train stops and we depart,
Like with most trips, we'll all have learned,
Life's journeys are lessons to make us smart,
For our wings we have to earn.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
This is an older Poem of mine. I wrote this one many years ago, by candlelight. The power was out, it was winter, and very, very cold. We had just finished telling stories to each other. Stories of how these hard times, would be so much better one day in the future. Well, My 3 (angels)children then fell asleep beside me, on the couch. We all were under a big blanket to keep us warm. I remember that they looked so very sweet when they were sleeping. The oldest girl asleep, leaning against me, my middle girl asleep, leaning on the oldest, and my baby boy, asleep, leaned against her. Like cute little sleeping dominos. Anyway, I wrote this one that night, while being the biggest domino. . . . LOL . . I hope that you all enjoy it. (warm smile) and Be Blessed Always.

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Comments (19)

BoyseeksGirl
Lovely poem, but you know what I cried reading your comments, you see children keep me alive they are the miracles that make us survivehug
Proudamerican100
It is through the darkest times the light will appear. You just have to keep looking. Your poem was sad it always is when you think of the children sigh
agoodguy2have
Mona: the trip of life is somewhat of a domino effect isn't it. an entertaining heartwarming read. ;-)
MonaLisaSmile4U
Aww
Thank You teddybear Boy, Don't Be Sad, it is a poem of HOPE from the Hard Times and Yes, Children Give us Life . .
Thank You teddybearProud, Your first sentence "It is through the darkest times the light will appear.", says it all. . It is not meant to be a sad poem . . just one of life lessons and Hope . . .
Thank You teddybearagoodguy, I believe you got it!wink
angel
gnj4u
Hi, MonaLisaSmile4U,
Life is such a trip, made all the more beautiful by the mutual support and warmth we provide each other All huddled in blankets escaping cold's spar. Thank you for sharing this lovely read to enjoy as we try to earn our wings!
Redex
Loved your trip of life and hope, had to smile at the reality of it at times. brought peace to me thankyou. I have 3 gown up sons!! and brought back warm memoriesteddybear
blackhawk70
that was beautiful lifes the journey and the destination makes the journey that much more fun angel you have a beautiful heart your kids are lucky to have a cool mom like you. teddybear life is indeed a trip im waiting for someone to finally tell me what's so funny. like i missed the joke. laugh heart beating bouquet peace
caroljoyce
Thnaks for a heartfelt write.teddybear
trurorob
sobering thoughts, i bet they are all double sixes now!!
rob
fjamesj9701
I see the hope I thionk it is very nice. I always find my hope in the dark.angel
freeatlast64847
A beautiful message of hope. Your strength is awesome!wine
MonaLisaSmile4U
Thank You All . . . Gorgeous Ladies and Handsome Gents
teddybeargnj, adding another feather to your wingsangel now.grin
teddybearRed, Kindred Mother's memories indeed. wink
teddybearblackhawk, Aww that was like the sweetest ever.hug
teddybearCarol, Sweet lady. You are always welcome, and Thank you, for bouquetYou!
teddybearRob, yes they are . . . Now I'm Doing the "They are all grown up" Mom Happy Dance, yaysee?
teddybearfjames, I agree,wine It's in the darkest times in our lives that we draw on Hope, and Faith to get through it all.
teddybearFree, Aww, I think your strength is just as awesome, and amazing, as seen through Your Poetic Words of late.hughere's to you toowine angel
Ladyjj
Full of hope and determination..a Lovely write and so wonderful with your added comment...
Thank you Monslisasmile for digging a older poem out for us applause

Ljj..cool angel
MonaLisaSmile4U
Aww Thank You teddybearLadyjj, for Your Very Sweet Compliments bouquet. . Sometimes I think some Older Poems stay true, no matter how many years may pass by.angel
Happygolucky4u
Thank you for sharing this. Your strength was like the blanket sheltering the babes, they are lucky to have you for a mum.teddybear
sophiasummer
We play an imagination game,
And stories we tell out loud,
Of the future's treasures we soon will claim.
On departure, we'll stand right proud.


Journeys are so hard sometimes
and one that I held no crimes

my child around me

as you say
For our wings we have to earn.



Beautiful deep thought
MonaLisaSmile4u

Keep growing that garden
SS
Ladybee42
very lovely poem monalisa
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
MonaLisaSmile4U
Thank You All . . .
teddybearHappy, Aww thank you for your sweet compliments You are so very kindgrinbouquet
teddybearironman, Wow! Thank you, what an honor for you to compare the imagery in my writing to that of one of the greatest writers in history. . You Honor Me Sir! . . . Strange you should mention John Steinbeck. My Mother was fortunate to meet and get to know him on a personal level. I remember her telling me his story of how long it took for his book "Jonathan Livingston Seagull", to be accepted and not rejected . . . Remember All, That even the Greatest Writers have been rejected many, many, many times too! . . So Keep Sending It Out! and Best Of Luck To You All!{Mother's Advice}hug
teddybearSophia, thank you, for a wonderful compliment from a Wonderfully sweet Soulbouquet
teddybearLadyBee, thank you, I am honored that a Talent, such as yourself, takes time to read my works of heart. (warm smile)bouquetangel
jerseygirl49
As with everything you write, my dear...wonderfull!! and such a touching.. warm story..God bless..JG...applause angel2 coffee rose
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