LIFE'S A TRIP
I sit here in a darkened car,
With three small ones at my side,
All huddled in blankets escaping cold's spar.
Lack Of Money 's the train that we ride.
This train someday will halt its wheels.
A destination will come to pass.
Having boxes with more than just love for our meals,
And bags just full of faith in our grasp.
So in the tunnels of the deepest despair,
Three smiles appear to me.
All warmed with hope that can't compare,
This trip strengthens internally.
We play an imagination game,
And stories we tell out loud,
Of the future's treasures we soon will claim.
On departure, we'll stand right proud.
So when this train stops and we depart,
Like with most trips, we'll all have learned,
Life's journeys are lessons to make us smart,
For our wings we have to earn.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
This is an older Poem of mine. I wrote this one many years ago, by candlelight. The power was out, it was winter, and very, very cold. We had just finished telling stories to each other. Stories of how these hard times, would be so much better one day in the future. Well, My 3 (angels)children then fell asleep beside me, on the couch. We all were under a big blanket to keep us warm. I remember that they looked so very sweet when they were sleeping. The oldest girl asleep, leaning against me, my middle girl asleep, leaning on the oldest, and my baby boy, asleep, leaned against her. Like cute little sleeping dominos. Anyway, I wrote this one that night, while being the biggest domino. . . . LOL . . I hope that you all enjoy it. (warm smile) and Be Blessed Always.
Comments (19)
Thank You Boy, Don't Be Sad, it is a poem of HOPE from the Hard Times and Yes, Children Give us Life . .
Thank You Proud, Your first sentence "It is through the darkest times the light will appear.", says it all. . It is not meant to be a sad poem . . just one of life lessons and Hope . . .
Thank You agoodguy, I believe you got it!
Life is such a trip, made all the more beautiful by the mutual support and warmth we provide each other All huddled in blankets escaping cold's spar. Thank you for sharing this lovely read to enjoy as we try to earn our wings!
rob
gnj, adding another feather to your wings now.
Red, Kindred Mother's memories indeed.
blackhawk, Aww that was like the sweetest ever.
Carol, Sweet lady. You are always welcome, and Thank you, for You!
Rob, yes they are . . . Now I'm Doing the "They are all grown up" Mom Happy Dance, see?
fjames, I agree, It's in the darkest times in our lives that we draw on Hope, and Faith to get through it all.
Free, Aww, I think your strength is just as awesome, and amazing, as seen through Your Poetic Words of late.here's to you too
Thank you Monslisasmile for digging a older poem out for us
Ljj..
And stories we tell out loud,
Of the future's treasures we soon will claim.
On departure, we'll stand right proud.
Journeys are so hard sometimes
and one that I held no crimes
my child around me
as you say
For our wings we have to earn.
Beautiful deep thought
MonaLisaSmile4u
Keep growing that garden
SS
Happy, Aww thank you for your sweet compliments You are so very kind
ironman, Wow! Thank you, what an honor for you to compare the imagery in my writing to that of one of the greatest writers in history. . You Honor Me Sir! . . . Strange you should mention John Steinbeck. My Mother was fortunate to meet and get to know him on a personal level. I remember her telling me his story of how long it took for his book "Jonathan Livingston Seagull", to be accepted and not rejected . . . Remember All, That even the Greatest Writers have been rejected many, many, many times too! . . So Keep Sending It Out! and Best Of Luck To You All!{Mother's Advice}
Sophia, thank you, for a wonderful compliment from a Wonderfully sweet Soul
LadyBee, thank you, I am honored that a Talent, such as yourself, takes time to read my works of heart. (warm smile)