My first glimpse of her had me wondering what were my chances My empty plate had me pushing buttons in search of new romances Taking my time, measuring my words, I moved forward in my quest Hiding my anxiety, despite the odds, I managed to receive the answer "Yes".
A picnic among the trees with green grass and cool breezes serving as witnesses to our initial review Words of endearment accompanied by irregular bites of tasty morsels as our time together really flew Hand in hand together we departed the location where two hearts beat as one Looks of satisfaction etched upon our faces giving joy to the moments together we had fun.
Upon separation a promise was given for a second call Both of us no longer socially isolated joyfully bidding farewell to the wall Her ear listening attentively for the magic ring of her phone Seizing the moment for continuity, or temporarily leaving her by herself, or perhaps forever alone.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Women always have control over men. The only moment when a man has an advantage is when the opportunity for a second date arises. At this time the woman is wondering "Will he call"?; "Will he keep me waiting"?; "Should I play hard to get"?; "Is this the beginning of something special"? Unfortunately many men have trouble getting "First Dates" so the "Temporary Advantage Mode" for them never materializes. The bottom line concerning love is always filled many times incorrectly by women.
Comments (3)
loved reading your poem
And then came to screaming halt...
my my my....
what wonders of the world, are tied with such ugly bows..
SS
Great write
With Looks of satisfaction etched upon our faces, it's nice to know that love is shared, not controlled one by the other.