My love has long lost lust. No longer craves the sticky salt embrace. What shall i wear if not your sweat? Such fleshy chains bleed when cut, a wound that never heals. A link said to be eternal, how can it be replaced? Pieces of my soul lost along the way.
Hi, InterestingEmily, The depth of loss is so well conveyed in What shall i wear if not your sweat? I was so moved by this line and your poem. Such powerful Pieces of my soul shared.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 28, 2010
Such a sad poem, thankyou for the share, I hope things get brighter for you soon
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The depth of loss is so well conveyed in What shall i wear if not your sweat? I was so moved by this line and your poem. Such powerful Pieces of my soul shared.