Twas a breathless night And daybreak was fighting to arrive On the far horizon The last fading stars Were caressing the early skies Saying their final goodbyes For the day ahead And yet It was far too early To hear the morning birdsong That made all The trees, whisper their words Of dawn greeting It was that time When all is still Night was not over Dawn had not managed to begin And All was quiet So we sat and stared Into each others eyes, that knowing look Of tranquillity and unspoken words That needed no telling It was our time A spellbound moment of love unbroken And peace to us had spoken
ahh! a time when few but lovers are awake rob. lovely poem...
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 28, 2010
Mmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!! so soothing,so caressing,tranquility,spellbound moments,such wonderful Peace flowing from the fount of a beautiful Soul into a receptacle of the heart.
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKJul 28, 2010
Such softness/peace and togetherness..no words needed. Beautiful poem Rob!
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EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJul 28, 2010
"The last fading stars Were caressing the early skies"
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lovely poem...
Beautiful poem Rob!
Ljj..
Were caressing the early skies"
poetry, pure poetry..., thanks Rob...
Such a tender, spellbound moment of love unbroken when silence says it all. Thank you for sharing.
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So tranquil, so soft, so emerging ...
Ty for sharing such peace.
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