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The Peace

Twas a breathless night
And daybreak was fighting to arrive
On the far horizon
The last fading stars
Were caressing the early skies
Saying their final goodbyes
For the day ahead
And yet
It was far too early
To hear the morning birdsong
That made all
The trees, whisper their words
Of dawn greeting
It was that time
When all is still
Night was not over
Dawn had not managed to begin
And
All was quiet
So we sat and stared
Into each others eyes, that knowing look
Of tranquillity and unspoken words
That needed no telling
It was our time
A spellbound moment of love unbroken
And peace to us had spoken
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
That beautiful silent time of day!

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jazzy75
The Peace you shared went straight into my heart! This was a beautiful and timeless piece :) Thank you my friendhug
caroljoyce
A charming piece of romantic peace, thanks Rob.
jazzy75
I see we are all cut from the same piece peace
Ladybee42
ahh! a time when few but lovers are awake rob.
lovely poem...thumbs up wine bouquet
paloma66
Mmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!! so soothing,so caressing,tranquility,spellbound moments,such wonderful Peace flowing from the fount of a beautiful Soul into a receptacle of the heart.thumbs up applause bouquet
Ladyjj
Such softness/peace and togetherness..no words needed.
Beautiful poem Rob!wine

Ljj.. cool angel
Earlgreytea
"The last fading stars
Were caressing the early skies"

poetry, pure poetry..., thanks Rob...
cambuff
I ask you, Rob, with thoughts and words, writen as those; Why are alone? Excellent piece! cheers
hedistuff
very nice...
freeatlast64847
Have to agree with all of the above. Well written rob! applause
andrew149
Nicely written Rob.....Thankyou......Andrew.
ChasingCars
It's rather beautiful and the moment just before dawn - the void when battles commence - lovely juxtaposition to find harmony there.
fjamesj9701
I liked how you painted that picture for me,it must of been a inspiring moment and a very good write this was Rob.cheers
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
Such a tender, spellbound moment of love unbroken when silence says it all. Thank you for sharing.
jeddah12
applause what aa romantic poetry and congrats senyor,you touch all our heartshandshake thanks a lot a more power senyor.applause that was truly romanticapplause jed
agoodguy2have
in that nether world time between times when quiet hearts beat slowly, that is The Peace
BoyseeksGirl
A great time and place to be, thanks Rob
Redex
you brought that most peaceful time beside me lovely werds Robteddybear
tomboygirl
Lovely and beautiful Robteddybear
trurorobonline today!
Thank you Jazzy, glad you enjoyed it!
rob
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Thank you Carol!
rob
jerseygirl49
Rob....bowing bowing rose rose this was outstanding, and so beautiful...laying there in each otheres eyes..hmmmmmm, must be so nice...thanx my friend..JG..wave hug
Gashly
it's amazing...and reminds me to make more peaceful moments, even if i am alone. excellent work, as usual, from one crap poet to another! cheers
GingerBe
Mornings are wonderful aren't they! Loved this.bouquet
paloma66
My favorite time to be at peace with my love,remember my poem,'Memory of Love at Dawn".This was really beautiful Rob.thumbs up
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Certainly are Jazzy, thank you
Rob
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True Bee true! thanks!
rob
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Thank you Paloma my friend
Rob
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Thank you LadyJJ!!
rob
hariksna
Yes, that beautiful time of the day a fathomless zero occupies the world...
hariksna
Nice write rob...it rob's the readers imagination
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Thanks Earl!
rob
jeddah12
very romantic side of you rob,i love the read,kudoscheers
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Thank you Cambuff(Dave)
rob
serpico12
beautiful piece of work ...good job ..great write..
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Thank you Hedistuff!
rob
beautifulyou
Yes, this is truly beautiful Rob ~

So tranquil, so soft, so emerging ... rose

Ty for sharing such peace.


happy place
jeddah12
very touching and beautiful poem rob,thanks for sharingwine
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Thanks FAL!
rob
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Thanks Andrew!
rob
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