a warm drop of rain

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Jul 2009 855 Views 10 comments

a warm drop of rain

sky all so blue tween clouds sun shines through, warming the skin, it's bout to begin. . . . times like this so welcome so bliss, in the distance you see for soon whats to be . . . . settle back an wait, with open arms, will it find it's way to me . . . . closer an closer coming to me, quietstorm's nearing eventually, ready to go, let it out slow, both in same place then they will know!

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Posted: Jul 2009

About this poem:

Papered thought's About a special lady I've met here. :)

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Comments (10)

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaJul 29, 2009

absolutely beautful , u have a gift in ur line in writing , really all ur shares are sweet as u , keep doing writing as u do great , really from inside my heart hope for u best wishes , thanks for share

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaJul 29, 2009

Very kind words, ty, i love writing. Encouraging words like yours keep's poets pillow not still. :)

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaJul 29, 2009

Lovely poem Bentlee, and then they will know..

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaJul 29, 2009

Yes they will, wonder what they think before then! :)

sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaJul 30, 2009

Dear poet, bentlee,
Now I am confused...is this poem for some one special?
Any way it’s wonderful.
I have a suggestion, why your poems are in the same format.
It is better if it is in sonnet or lyrics format.

Thank you,
sabeel.