I have navigated the windswept desert of my soul, Fought untold battles in the valley of discontent, Watching too as they turned to dust, Pastures new, that I thought were heaven sent.
On the barren seas of my mind I warred, Against the storm I raged, Cursed the sand, the dying shadows of the sun, With my face pressed against the bars that have me caged.
I salute you!
What an adversary you are, such a worthy foe, But know this, I will fight until I win this war, At every turn, at every battle, I will even the score, Until you let me live the peace I long to know.
I don't have it but some in my family do and it is indeed a hard battle....
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 1, 2010
Very good..in area that many wouldn't understand Andrew..
My Ex-Hub suffered with paranoia Schizophrenia/bi-polar..his mind was his cage..
I like the last positive verse.. "I will fight until I win this war!" Because it is a constant battle for those who have this illness..and their loved ones.
Bravo Andrew, to explain clearly gives understanding, you help us all with this writing.... I am so happy that you post this again as I miss the first time around... RESPECT!
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My Ex-Hub suffered with paranoia Schizophrenia/bi-polar..his mind was his cage..
I like the last positive verse..
"I will fight until I win this war!"
Because it is a constant battle for those who have this illness..and their loved ones.
Thankyou Andrew for sharing..
Ljj..
Great story-telling and great poetry...
Cheers Buddy
Bill