Desertion

Despondent, she creaks to and
fro, to and fro, upon the
porch, her bony hands stroking

the tomcat curled in sleep on
her lap. Hours it's been since
he left. Stealing under the

branches, dark with bats, rowing
across the river, its cold
surface flecked with scum, he'll

be in the city while she, creaking
to and fro, to and fro, beholds
the raw red face of dawn.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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caroljoyce
Desolate and atmospheric, could see it clearly.sigh
Ladybee42
you do like the dark places..and you do them very well.thumbs up
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Snowfox9
Thank you, friends. I'll submit another before retiring to bed.
gnj4u
Hi, Snowfox9,
beholds the raw red face of dawn ...what powerful images of Desertion!
hedistuff
very nice...I can't see through the fog...crossing the river, styx, and then back again...eventually, not alone...
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