i swung the door and made my pitch "buy one drink! see the whole show on the inside!" it was a friday night the street was crawling with money i spotted a group headed my way there must have been forty or fifty a tour group wandering down the sidewalk with no guide i just opened the door and bowed with a flourish they filed in like sheep their driver came running toward me he was pissed off! these tours were only supposed to go to certain clubs where they had an "arrangement" the driver was screaming in my face i took a twenty out of my pocket told him to go in and have a drink on me he actually growled when he grabbed the twenty out of my hand but he went in the manager came out asked me how in the hell i did that i told him he owed me twenty bucks he paid me on the spot next day angelo, the big boss, called me into his "office" his office was the bar next door angelo owned a lot of clubs he was a big "family man" i went in and said "yes sir?" he said "ey, i 'ere you been doin a good job out dere" i said "thank you sir, i really like my job out there i don't want any other jobs i just like my job out there" he looked me in the eye and patted me on the cheek "you a good boy" he said...
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Never take a job you can't quit with both kneecaps...
aye, i loved your explanation about the poem. OH and the poem itself was really cool, too! watch out for the "family" types...good advice.
freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAAug 4, 2010
Thanks Redex, andrew and Ladybee, as ever. Positive feedback from talented poets!
Thanks Gashly! Yeah, long ago and far away but, was down there a few years ago and nothing has changed. Different names and faces but the Big Easy is still a "Family friendly" town...
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAAug 4, 2010
how did i know you were speaking of N'awlins?
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 4, 2010
You make us laugh Free,jolly guy you are,thanks for the laugh and good verse.
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 4, 2010
I agree with Redex..Hints of Del Boy! thanks Freeatlast..brilliant story.
Thanks Gashly! How did you know? Maybe the accent... Thanks paloma! Just try to bring a little cheer... Thanks Ljj! Who is Del Boy? Thanks hedi, I'm sure Angelo is long gone, but his nephews live on...
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Thanks Gashly! Yeah, long ago and far away but, was down there a few years ago and nothing has changed. Different names and faces but the Big Easy is still a "Family friendly" town...
Ljj
Thanks paloma! Just try to bring a little cheer...
Thanks Ljj! Who is Del Boy?
Thanks hedi, I'm sure Angelo is long gone, but his nephews live on...
Pointing me in a crooked line - Indigo Girls
Lately it occurs to me
What a long strange trip it's been - Grateful Dead
Thanks goodguy and carol!