Breaking Free

Breaking free should be easy
for that is where I want
and where I need to be.
Sometimes, however, the pieces
cut like glass and I must wait
for the bleeding to pass.

Experimenting with altered states
with friends, I try my wings
knowing that they will love and
care for me ‘til the hour, late.
Mixed with Calexico’s chords,
Andrew Bird’s voice floats over
his violin strings straining tears.

These are the sounds I hear
as I close my eyes and
remember who I am
and how I got here
knowing at the end of the day
I will be going home.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2010

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agoodguy2have
gnj: As always expected you bring depth of thought to these pages. like cut glass the stanza's both shine and wound and shine again. A good night listening to music with friends is indeed a night well spent on life. Thank you.
paloma66
Such lovely words Joy,'sometimes however ......for the bleeding to pass.Thank you Joy.angel hug
Happygolucky4u
"Sometimes, however, the pieces cut like glass and I must wait for the bleeding to pass." Breaking free. I like the sounds of it.

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fjamesj9701
Very captivating, good lines I agree with GoodGuy cut and heal.Lovelywine
Ladybee42
lovely poem gnj, really enjoyed the words
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
jeddah12
applausethat sound like me,i was deeply cut in the heart but now im healed cheering angel kiss teddybear bouquet
caroljoyce
Deep, beautiful, thought provoking.
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have, paloma66, Happygolucky4u, fjamesj9701, Ladybee42, jeddah12, and caroljoyce,
Written at the Newport Folk Festival to help someone I know who is going through a difficult time, this poem was written with an appreciation of the power of friends to see one through to healing. I am pleased that my poem speaks to you.
hedistuff
this is nice...
amahlala
Experimenting with altered states
with friends, I try my wings
Those lines are beautiful, as is the rest of the poem! thank youbouquet
Blacksttud40
A very heartfelt ...

bouquet bouquet bouquet
trurorob
marvellous depth!
rob
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff, amahlala, Blacksttud40, and trurorob,
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and really appreciate hearing from you!
Redex
Beautiful poem with so much depthhug
gnj4u
Hi, Redux,
Thank you. It's nice to have y'all help me explore it!
Earlgreytea
Dear Massachusetts, we're home, we are home, nevertheless, i pay tribute to your beautiful and meaningful work, thanks for sharing...
jazzy75
Captivating poetry my friend....you style and warmth shines throughteddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Earlgreytea,
Although I keep getting sent to the wrong address, I am so happy that you "are home" and that my post reached you.

Hi, Jazzy75,
To captivate your attention is quite an honor.

Thank you both for your continued support! I really appreciate it!!!
ben999
lovely reflective words, hopefully when the bleeding stops, we will all be home, one day.
apple2010
Hi

The first and the last parts speak for me. Thank you applause
tomboygirl
Very nice,thoughtful and deep,thankyou for sharingteddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Ben999, apple2010, and tomboygirl,
Yes, "we will all be home, one day." It is nice to know that my words can speak to others. Thank you for your kind words that speak to me.
Mizzy4
Hi Joy,
Perusing your poems here,
I found this gem......
Its a place I know well
and love your version
of the story.
I certainly hope you
found peace !!

Lovely poetry ........

hug angel2 grin

Thanks for all your kind reviews !
123whisper
Hope you found peaceangel2 Lovely poembouquet
candykid
Hello Joy. A very cool poem, please don't expedite the process.purple heart teddybear
Fellsman
Hi Joy

This was posted before my time on CS: However, I detect a deep melancholy throughout the narrative (I had to check out Calexico's chords on Google) - and but for the voice I am strongly reminded of Samuel Barber's Adagio for strings - also very melancholy as you doubtlessly know.

Riven from the depths of your soul, dear lady - and very, very readable.

Kindest regards

Bill wine
darkhorse555
beautifully penned piece of writing joy excellent pen dear friend god blessangel thumbs up
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