Breaking free should be easy for that is where I want and where I need to be. Sometimes, however, the pieces cut like glass and I must wait for the bleeding to pass.
Experimenting with altered states with friends, I try my wings knowing that they will love and care for me ‘til the hour, late. Mixed with Calexico’s chords, Andrew Bird’s voice floats over his violin strings straining tears.
These are the sounds I hear as I close my eyes and remember who I am and how I got here knowing at the end of the day I will be going home.
gnj: As always expected you bring depth of thought to these pages. like cut glass the stanza's both shine and wound and shine again. A good night listening to music with friends is indeed a night well spent on life. Thank you.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 5, 2010
Such lovely words Joy,'sometimes however ......for the bleeding to pass.Thank you Joy.
Hi, agoodguy2have, paloma66, Happygolucky4u, fjamesj9701, Ladybee42, jeddah12, and caroljoyce, Written at the Newport Folk Festival to help someone I know who is going through a difficult time, this poem was written with an appreciation of the power of friends to see one through to healing. I am pleased that my poem speaks to you.
Hi, hedistuff, amahlala, Blacksttud40, and trurorob, Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and really appreciate hearing from you!
Hi, Ben999, apple2010, and tomboygirl, Yes, "we will all be home, one day." It is nice to know that my words can speak to others. Thank you for your kind words that speak to me.
Hi Joy, Perusing your poems here, I found this gem...... Its a place I know well and love your version of the story. I certainly hope you found peace !!
Lovely poetry ........
Thanks for all your kind reviews !
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaSep 7, 2014
Hello Joy. A very cool poem, please don't expedite the process.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 7, 2014
Hi Joy
This was posted before my time on CS: However, I detect a deep melancholy throughout the narrative (I had to check out Calexico's chords on Google) - and but for the voice I am strongly reminded of Samuel Barber's Adagio for strings - also very melancholy as you doubtlessly know.
Riven from the depths of your soul, dear lady - and very, very readable.
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Written at the Newport Folk Festival to help someone I know who is going through a difficult time, this poem was written with an appreciation of the power of friends to see one through to healing. I am pleased that my poem speaks to you.
with friends, I try my wings
Those lines are beautiful, as is the rest of the poem! thank you
rob
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and really appreciate hearing from you!
Thank you. It's nice to have y'all help me explore it!
Although I keep getting sent to the wrong address, I am so happy that you "are home" and that my post reached you.
Hi, Jazzy75,
To captivate your attention is quite an honor.
Thank you both for your continued support! I really appreciate it!!!
The first and the last parts speak for me. Thank you
Yes, "we will all be home, one day." It is nice to know that my words can speak to others. Thank you for your kind words that speak to me.
Perusing your poems here,
I found this gem......
Its a place I know well
and love your version
of the story.
I certainly hope you
found peace !!
Lovely poetry ........
Thanks for all your kind reviews !
This was posted before my time on CS: However, I detect a deep melancholy throughout the narrative (I had to check out Calexico's chords on Google) - and but for the voice I am strongly reminded of Samuel Barber's Adagio for strings - also very melancholy as you doubtlessly know.
Riven from the depths of your soul, dear lady - and very, very readable.
Kindest regards
Bill