Sentiment within souls

love is a magnificent journey
that our hearts can make.
love is a misterious wonder
is a risk to take.
it's a double edge sword
that causes happiness or pain
it comes in different ways
and in many names
love has no definition
no real reason.
Not made by man
but expressed through God
it is there
for the world to share.
love can come in many
beutiful forms
you can love your lover
you can love your friend
you can love your family
yet love is so hard to comprehend
they say a heart can be broken
but how is this true?
a heart is just an organ
so what is the thruth?
either way we do feel
love is part of a lot
holding hands
giving hugs
sweet kisses
and making love
love can be mistaken
for obsession
or revenge
but love is not part of that
is a different thing
love is honesty
not war
love is harmony
not horror
love is friendship and truth
is a sweet enchanted tune
love is an enternal puzzle
it really has no end
piece by piece it goes
who knows when it will end?
love can sometimes die
or forever stay alive
but whatever path it takes
the happiness real love makes!
how can I truly explain this
when I'm a love sick fool
these words may have no meaning
to you or maybe they could
to some love is a game
is an aventure without a theme
to others love is sincere
is as real as the way they feel.
lust and temptation
they are shadows that crawl
they can sometimes take over you
and you'll think that they're love
try not to confuse these
those don't reach love at all
love is like a mountain
that stands proud and strong
others can try to break it
but they'll fail to make it
love has rays that sparkle
and shine so very bright
compared to the shine the sun's light gives
love dominates over all
love can make someone do crazy things
and it makes you blind
there's nothing worse in this world
than someone who is blind
from love
love is just a word
when there are no emotions
when two are not as one
when there is a commotion
when one makes the other an option
love is a bird
that sings
and flyes free
its a beutiful sentiment
that is for the poor or the rich
anyone can love
either black or white
no mater what religion
orientation
girl or guy
love can have frustation
but learn to have apreciation
real love has no fear
no strong pain, doubt, or tears
love is so much more
than someone can ever know
so ask yourself this
"do I know what love really is?
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Posted: Aug 2010

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andrew149
Thankyou Justtme, a heart felt piece of work, thankyou for posting,
welcome to Poets Corner......Kindest regards......Andrew......xxx
gnj4u
Hi, justtme,
We try to describe true love but face the same difficulty as when describing God. Its presence is known and felt but is beyond proving its existence. Through it, we become the best of ourselves.
justtme
thank you. I wrote this when I was younger, I was 15 I think, now I'm 19 but there is much to be learned through expirience and making the best out of the worst, I can only hope I improve at writing poetry
justtme
thank you. I wrote this when I was younger, I was 15 I think, now I'm 19 but there is much to be learned through expirience and making the best out of the worst, I can only hope I improve at writing poetry
Ladyjj
A warm loving poem Justtme..thumbs up
Thank you for sharing one of many more poems to come.
A Warm welcome to the Poets corner..handshake

Ljj..cool angel
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