Captivating Eyes

When I look into your eyes
they brighten up my day
For when I look into your eyes
I just can't look away.

I buckle at the knees
when I look at you
I take one deep breath
cause I don't know what to do.

Should I keep staring
now would that be wise
if I should keep on staring
I might end up with black eyes

I remember when i first saw them
my jaw dropped to the ground
those captivating eyes
were something special that I found

I don't know how to finish this poem
I must say
but I will tell you this
they are beautiful in everyway.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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tinypixie
Oooh this is so sweet! But the black eyes made me laugh laugh
Redex
Lovely and well finishedbanana
damilz
thank you all for your comments, much appreciated.
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