~My Ole Car~

I hop in my old clunker
Oh she’s such a junker..

Yes she’s all rusty
And so very dusty…

Holes in the seat
As well has no heat..

All the paint is peeling
The lining is falling from the ceiling…

I turn the key
Slapping my knee..

She spits and sputters
As I dodge all the gutters..

My car coughs and chokes
Laughter comes from my folks..

I grin as I go bouncing
She’s loud in her announcing..

She’s missing a tire
The door is held on by some wire..

She has only one light
When it works it shines bright..

My first car, I got such a deal
Got her for nothing, oh what a steal..

Grinning as I grabbed the wheel…

~Author Elina Rawlins~
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Remember the old car we first drove? this is a dedication to that car.

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fjamesj9701
I had a clunker or two , I do miss them. You see I now own a paint and body shop and it would of been nice to know than what I do now.Enjoyed the read
Happygolucky4u
Thank you for the memory. Mine was a gigantic thing. Looked like a big old boat or tank coming down the road. My dad said the bigger the better for me. He worried about us wreckingconversing
1gypsygurl
Yes so funny. I had a neighbor that when their daughter was to get her first they thought "the bigger and brighter" the better. The got a school bus yellow station wagon with huge blinker lights. OMG to funny, you could see her coming a mile away!
gnj4u
Hi, 1gypsygurl,
No matter what the condition of the car, one's first definitely holds a special place in the heart. Grinning as I grabbed the wheel… says it all!
trurorob
dont ya just love em!!!
rob
freeatlast64847
Mine was a '57 Chevy that I bought for $150. It was rear-ended and got $150 settlement so it was basically a free car. Then something happened to the engine that I thought was a blown rod, so I sold it for $50. The guy removed two bolts, put in a new timing chain and drove it away! Ah well, young and dumb. That car would be worth thousands today... Cool write Elina! wine
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