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amahlala

by amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota, USA

Aug 2010 586 Views 8 comments

Random 2

Author: amahlala

I wonder.....do I amuse you?
.....do I tease you?
.....do I annoy you?
I contemplate.....am I living?
.....am I happy?
.....am I neurotic?
I dream.....can I fly?
.....can I touch?
.....can I feel?
I hope.....that I may laugh.
.....that I may cry.
.....that I may love.

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Posted: Aug 2010

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Random thoughts......

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Comments (8)

hedistuff

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAAug 13, 2010

nice poser lala...my answers:yes,yes,why do you want to,yes,yes,who isn't,of course,I hope so,please do,laugh,cry,love...thanks

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 13, 2010

Love the way you write, YES YES AND YESSES

Ladyjj

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 13, 2010

Great Ama..

YES!..to all I say..essence of life, nicely wrapped up.

Ljj..

amahlala

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 13, 2010

Thanks Hedi, Redex and Ladyjj

Just random thoughts that float thru my mind....love all of your comments!

andrew149

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 13, 2010

AHHH dear Ama.....like this style from you, says a lot too, Thank you....Andrew....xxx

blortxsnick

blortxsnickst. john's, Newfoundland CanadaAug 15, 2010

yeah, I'm with Andrew. this style suits you and it slipped so easily into me you'd think it was a white russian with ice lol

amahlala

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 15, 2010

Thanks Andrew...and Blortsnickx! (Hope I spelled that right)...A white russian would go a treat with dinner tonight!

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 15, 2010

Nice style and great flow amahlala!

Your write speaks to our humanity ...

"I wonder...
I contemplate...
I dream...
I hope..."

to you!

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