~Locked Inside~

I was full of life, happy and carefree
One day I woke to find my body wasn’t me..

I looked out at the world and dreamt of that day
That I thought would always stay..

Times that was good and I could pretend
My life was so full of joy and it wouldn’t end..

I struggle to walk or hold you tight
Hoping my mind will always stay right..

My heart reaches out even if my hands can not
Feelings and tears of what my life has got..

People stop and now look at me
Not understanding or knowing how it can be...

I close my eyes and get lost it my past
It all went by so very fast..

A cage I live in, my body I’m locked inside
The world of pain I cannot hide...

Give thanks of your life so free
Remember that you could be me..

~Author Elina Rawlins~
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Struggles of muscular sclerosis....

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ben999
nice read gypsygurl, we all struggle to be free in mind, and body, to varying degrees of solitude, and imprisonment, ben
penny57
gypsygurl....my friend has ms, and you describe her feelings perfectly. when someone looks well, no one knows the pain the're going through. thank you for the enlightment.teddybear
Ladyjj
I find it inspiring at the strength and courage of all who deal with the every day challenges of MS..
Thank you for highlighting so well in your poem Gypsygurl..hug wine

Ljj..cool angel
beautifulyou
A gentle reminder for us to be grateful for our health.

Ty wine
cambuff
Hey you.... We've only talked briefly, but what I do know of you, you are a beautiful woman inside and by your pic, outside as well! Thank you for sharing deep and beautiful thoughts, again!
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cambuff
I hate to add after thoughts, but this I need to say; thank you for sharing deep, beautiful and MOVING thoughts!
tinypixie
Thank you for your beautiful and touching poem....wave

TP4G
1gypsygurl
Thank you for all your wonderful comments. teddybear
sophiasummer
From "Locked Inside" dearest lady, you are so "unlocked" with what is also inside, your beauty of your words show the beauty of your yourself...
We see that,1gysygurlbouquet

SS
tinypixie
The vehicle is fragile,
but the driver is strong.

teddybear

G4TP
galaxy15
Thank you gypsygurl
a very touching poem

Galaxy15angel
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