dancin' on fly paper

..on shaky ground
..with you, my love
it seems that I'm..not the only guy
who's...caught your eye
try as I might...
...and lord I try
can't shake this sudden feeling
that makes me cry
It's all about me, I won't be shy
if I can't have you, then I'll just die

I'm in a bad situation
not a feel good vibration
..hardly celebration
tangled negative sensation

back and forth, you go, between us
...piece of tail?
off and on..when, you're of mind to
is love for sale?

I can't go on...
...feeling this way
must somehow find the words...to say
that I love you, you must be mine
I want to hold you...all the time
yet you keep on searchin' for what's to find...

you're a fast lady walkin'
diggin' on the talkin'
not ready to be tied down
no eye on a wedding gown

so, I guess, I'll go on to tomorrow
...just as I've been
there's no telling
...where tomorrow may lead you
to me...or to him
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2010

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Comments (6)

agoodguy2have
Hedi: have you been listening to that country station again? I love the the title ...one might even say I'm stuck on it. ;-)
Redex
What a plight your in! loved this read, where tomorrow will lead into a big adventurepeace
cambuff
Can she be trusted in either direction she chooses... I wonder... Good read, thanks Hedistuff!
caroljoyce
I am sure you are writing this on someone else's behalf, somehow. You can never be trusted though, could mean anything. Anyway, it was remarkably good, great flow, excellent rhyme and I really liked the presentation.
Did someone else write it? oohhhh don't hurt me!!cool happy birthday violin
Pinkpoetress
Hedi,
Great poem. It left me wanting to read more. Thanks. dancing
Ladybee42
oh man... you have the words! lovely write...thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
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