Beyond Blue

Quietly phone blends air to bleak
Sings in silence sharp and deep
Undone letters touch and cry
Embers of want softly die
Words of love began unmeant
Read inside out, thought not sent
Slender slivers of quiet belief
Taken by the absence thief
Was not all that I really should
Not lived life to best and good
Knowing so I wonder, ponder
Why such fragile heart will wander
Yet happy lives beyond blue yonder.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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andrew149
Just over the horizon CJ, very well written, thank you.....Andrew....xxx
Ladyjj
Something to touch many again CJ..
Wizard of Oz and Dorothy for some reason comes to mind..
"Follow the yellow brick road"..dancing
Good write again CJ..thank youhug

Ljj angel
blortxsnick
Oh honey, please dont "let your embers of want, die". crying If I was there I would hold you till you were warm again.
tinypixie
Oh cj crying been there done it too many times.....but I know now why......its not us....it's cos we are special....different.....but we gotta learn too.....yours must be somwhere nearby too....teddybear

TP4G
gnj4u
Hi, caroljoyce,
Quietly phone blends air to bleak...Slender slivers of quiet belief Taken by the absence thief. Happy may live beyond blue yonder, but poetry lives within you.
galaxy15
"embers of want softly die"

What a moving line caroljoyce...
Dont let that fire go out!

G4TPwave
Pinkpoetress
Caroljoyce,
Wonderful poem as usual. I just love your poems. So nice.
agoodguy2have
carol, this is in my opinion one of your finest efforts. The title with it's double or triple meaning starts into couplets of restrained wisdom and beauty. They are all good,
"Slender slivers of quiet belief
Taken by the absence thief" says soo much in such a poetic way.
"Was not all that I really should
Not lived life to best and good" is a sentiment of coming up short in our own eyes, but our own eyes are not the only eyes.

As you so often do, you ask very deep emotional questions, in a quiet and loving way. 13 lines of sheer poetry!
Redex
such a sad poem of watching Carol hug
jazzy75
caroljoyce - your words evoke such a sadness...i really felt the emotions in this onehug
Happygolucky4u
I could not pick just one part to say I loved it. I thought the whole thing was beautifully poetic. "Yet happy lives beyond blue yonder" Go yonder my friendwine
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