Quietly phone blends air to bleak Sings in silence sharp and deep Undone letters touch and cry Embers of want softly die Words of love began unmeant Read inside out, thought not sent Slender slivers of quiet belief Taken by the absence thief Was not all that I really should Not lived life to best and good Knowing so I wonder, ponder Why such fragile heart will wander Yet happy lives beyond blue yonder.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 17, 2010
Just over the horizon CJ, very well written, thank you.....Andrew....xxx
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 17, 2010
Something to touch many again CJ.. Wizard of Oz and Dorothy for some reason comes to mind.. "Follow the yellow brick road".. Good write again CJ..thank you
Oh honey, please dont "let your embers of want, die". If I was there I would hold you till you were warm again.
tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKAug 17, 2010
Oh cj been there done it too many times.....but I know now why......its not us....it's cos we are special....different.....but we gotta learn too.....yours must be somwhere nearby too....
Hi, caroljoyce, Quietly phone blends air to bleak...Slender slivers of quiet belief Taken by the absence thief. Happy may live beyond blue yonder, but poetry lives within you.
galaxy15melbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 18, 2010
"embers of want softly die"
What a moving line caroljoyce... Dont let that fire go out!
G4TP
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAAug 18, 2010
Caroljoyce, Wonderful poem as usual. I just love your poems. So nice.
carol, this is in my opinion one of your finest efforts. The title with it's double or triple meaning starts into couplets of restrained wisdom and beauty. They are all good, "Slender slivers of quiet belief Taken by the absence thief" says soo much in such a poetic way. "Was not all that I really should Not lived life to best and good" is a sentiment of coming up short in our own eyes, but our own eyes are not the only eyes.
As you so often do, you ask very deep emotional questions, in a quiet and loving way. 13 lines of sheer poetry!
I could not pick just one part to say I loved it. I thought the whole thing was beautifully poetic. "Yet happy lives beyond blue yonder" Go yonder my friend
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Wizard of Oz and Dorothy for some reason comes to mind..
"Follow the yellow brick road"..
Good write again CJ..thank you
Ljj
TP4G
Quietly phone blends air to bleak...Slender slivers of quiet belief Taken by the absence thief. Happy may live beyond blue yonder, but poetry lives within you.
What a moving line caroljoyce...
Dont let that fire go out!
G4TP
Wonderful poem as usual. I just love your poems. So nice.
"Slender slivers of quiet belief
Taken by the absence thief" says soo much in such a poetic way.
"Was not all that I really should
Not lived life to best and good" is a sentiment of coming up short in our own eyes, but our own eyes are not the only eyes.
As you so often do, you ask very deep emotional questions, in a quiet and loving way. 13 lines of sheer poetry!