Be quiet

by Amendashenyang, Liaoning, China

Aug 2010 684 Views 6 comments

Be quiet......

When you leave
No need to announce to all the world
You are not half as important as you imagined you are

When they leave
No need to make loud bark
To shift shame on others with reasons
You catched at shadows.
They leave because they like

They come back quietly
Where is the analyser with loud bark

Very simple reason
You understand?

I look down on you
Unbearably vulgar.....

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Posted: Aug 2010

About this poem:

Just thought of those unreasonable vulgar post on the forums
and
to see if my English has made a progress during the study.....hehe

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Comments (6)

cambuffOcala, Florida USAAug 19, 2010

Excellent progress on the English; I'm hoping the message does not fall on deaf ears.
Thank you, Amenda.

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 19, 2010

Very well done Amenda.. This is why I enjoy our Poets corner

and your English is great. Thank you.

Ljj

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 19, 2010

Thankyou Amenda, I stay away from the forums, personal choice....On the subject of the poem...... I really like it. Your English does seem to be getting better too....Kindest regards,
Andrew.....xxx

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaAug 20, 2010

Dear cambuff,

Thanks for your comment....you were so bold that you dared to say I had deaf ear....huh?

I have sharp ears and I really want to improve them on listening to the charming English....

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaAug 20, 2010

Dear layjj,

Thanks for your comment....your photo is so nice and cool!

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaAug 20, 2010

Dear Andrew,

Thanks for your comment and I don't think we need to leave forums that's not belongs to any individual, nomatter he or she has sharp teeth or not

I'll go there also when I feel I like....
Thanks for your encouragement...

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