THE WITCHES MIST

THE WITCHES MIST

Few had made his heart sing,
but she was a choir of angels,
that fond face, that peered through the mist,
capturing his heart.

But mist is a subtle thing,
weaving, and floating, settling , and lifting,
and she was all these things to him,
wrapping him in her misty heart.

But alas, her gentle mist suddenly drifted,
slowly releasing him, from her damp embrace,
and floated off ghost-like to haunt elsewhere,
leaving him wretched with despair, for her mist.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
She know who she is, and what she's done to me, the Witch.

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andrew149
Putting the personal connotations apart for a moment, I really like this poem, thankyou for posting it Ben......Kindest regards,
Andrew.
ben999
thank you andrew, coming from you that's a compliment indeed.
agoodguy2have
i'm with Andrew here Ben. A vaporus write of longing an loss. Thank you.
ben999
agoodguy2have, thank you, enchantment is not easily escaped, aint that a fact.
Ladybee42
oh! you are snared..wine so how will you fare?
i think all right, you are experienced prey nons?
laugh laugh bouquet bouquet
ben999
alas; ladybee, femme-fatal, the fatal attraction, is sometimes, the black widow spider, and that's the raw of it
caroljoyce
Atmospheric and ethereal, a skilful write indeed. Mist is indeed subtle, it completely lacks clarity.
I preferred to read this, as Andrew stated, without the personal.
Ladyjj
Ben...this poem is very atmospheric..deep, wishfull, and conveys the feeling of loss.thumbs up
I agree with all comments concerning the personal point.

Ljj
ben999
thank you caroljoyce, the poem is an expression, and extension of real life emotions, its real, stuff hurts.
ben999
ladyjj, thank you, sometimes our poems are very personal, there is no hiding place from the heart.
beautifulyou
Powerful write ben, more powerful than the mist...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ angel2

Be gone, despair!
ben999
thank you beautifulyou, the mist would lift to wink at you, methinks.
StressFree
I liked this poemwine We all experienced that at one point in our lives, so this is something that relates to anyone. It's a good thing there are other shades of mist out there, if you will. I've learned that in life, as painfully as it was, focusing on an ex too long only brings disharmonywine
ben999
i agree stressfree, there is a time to move on, after 24 years, it takes some moving, aint that a fact.
tomboygirl
Very atmospheric poem ben,I enjoyed this..
Particularly the 2nd verse.xxx
ben999
thank you, tomboygirl, glad you enjoyed the read.
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