Beyond our World

Beyond all this rush, rush, rush
Peacefully kind is the voice of the hush
Loving, inviting, eternal and lush

Safe in the stillness of the infinite deep
Rested above that dreamed of by sleep
Safekeeping each soul to tenderly keep

Everyday start will whisper with kiss
Reaches her arms beyond all that bliss
No atom of sweetness will ever she miss

Softness stretches past reach of harm
Infinite light in momentum of calm
Pours on love as the gentlest of balm.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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gnj4u
Hi, caroljoyce,
No atom of sweetness will ever she miss. What a gift to be able to absorb all of the sweetness! In the rush, rush, rush, it is so easy to let much pass without notice. Your poem is the gentlest of balm. Thank you for sharing.
agoodguy2have
C.J. I agree with GNJ, your words always sooth, like a balm, and i like the non-standard rhyming scheme too. ;-)
Macduff5
A nice poem...I like it. You have a nice sense of repetition and rhyme. Not so easy to do.
jazzy75
A beautiful and peaceful poem my friend...exactly what I needed this morning :) Thanks for stilling my daybouquet
tinypixie
Oh cj this is so loving and beautifulhug

TP4G
paloma66
A soothing balm for the soul,So beautiful mellow,like a gentle breeze.thumbs up angel bouquet
tomboygirl
Lovely calming read and some lovely lines in there that gnj4u mentionedteddybear
Happygolucky4uonline today!
"Everyday start will whisper with kiss" Wow excellent start for a day. Great write.
teddybear
Ladyjj
Thank you CJ for posting such a calming, gentle balm with your soft write..hug bouquet

Ljj angel
caroljoyce
Thanks for reading and bothering to comment,
Love CJ xxx
sophiasummer
Beyond all this rush, rush, rush

caroljoyce
A gentleness! that just IS so strong
What a wonderful air, you so gently shared
X
Sophia
galaxy15
Peaceful, loving, safe, rested, soft and infinite...
admirable aspirations and a great write as usual CJapplause
G4TP
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