Linger

Soft and tender,
Along my thigh.
From my lips,
The softest cry.

Lightly dancing,
Along my waist.
Slow and gentle,
Savoring the taste.

A hot path made,
To reach my lips.
Hungry and consumed,
Arching my hips.

Tracing my body,
With your fingers.
All the places,
Your kisses linger.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
My first attempt so be kind. Thanx Open for the encouragement.

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Comments (21)

bestbefore
Very sensual. 5*'s for a first attempt.wave
nanners2863online today!
Aww..thanx Best. Posting your poetry can leave you feeling so exposed. wave
cambuff
Very nice!!!
beautifulyou
This is lovely nanners.

Written with grace and finesse.

Wonderful first attempt!

Definitely keep going...

... bouquet
opentuit
Oh, Nance!applause

What beautiful sensuality... it totally suits you!!!kiss
tinypixie
Ooh nanners.....this is beautiful!!!!
nanners2863online today!
blushing blushing Thanx guys!! teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Nanners what a beautiful way with words you have. Ok one cold shower for mewave

It was poetic and beautifully written.flower
Ladybee42
nanners, you do yourself proud!
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
agoodguy2have
be kind? nanners being kind is complementing stanzas that unfulfill...this nanner fills completely, very sensual, hot job! ;-)
MovinFWD
I am impressed nannersthumbs up and a little turned on tooyay rolling on the floor laughing
gnj4u
Hi, nanners2863,
We will be Savoring the taste of Linger for quite a while! Nicely done! Looking forward to your future posts.
nanners2863online today!
You guys are so supportive..thank you for all the kind words..you too Movin' lol teddybear teddybear
Barrellofart
Bravo indeed! applause
eria1212
Thats hot. thumbs up thumbs up Your hot. smitten

Its getting hot in here!kiss

devil
nanners2863online today!
Lol...gee..blushing Thank you
Proudamerican100
Very nicely done. You wrote it beautiful and tastefully donebouquet
masri
thank you sooooooooooooooo nice like you
bless you
nice feeling lips
gemeh22
nice cheering I like it hug
CruncH007
The feelings,the passion. A long time since felt, but not forgotten. Beautiful, thanks for sharing.bouquet
livespaul
Loved your poem...wish if I could know you more...the woman with the soft lips..
Paul
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