RE: Drive Thru
This poem is really a Senryu, daradloffGood to see you trying out new forms.
The 5/7/5 syllable count is perfect.
Mick.
RE: Remembering
Nice poem on some nice things to remember, like my days working at Hardee's back in the late 80's and early 90's.
RE: Mother Nature Speaks.
I don't know how it is in Ireland, but here the main problem is too many people coming into our country, climate is definitely taking a backseat to man's greed.
RE: Mother Nature Speaks.
Nicely written poem."It's not too late for man to save the globe,
But mankind is a greedy, selfish beast."
Well said. Although, we see and feel the climate change, most people are in denial.
RE: Mother Nature Speaks.
Hi Mick.Always loved your sonnets.. And also the wise words. You never know what comes tomorrow..I don’t know, maybe it sounds too naive, but I don’t lose faith in humanity. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. greetings. Lily
RE: Mother Nature Speaks.
I agree with your words,Mike.Nature is extremely disconcerted and fretful every and each day more and more and more.
Humanity does not understand that with all their misdeeds nature becomes angry and vindictive.
That is why all the natural catastrophes betide on the Earth.
Keep going,M.
Lovely written poem.
B.
RE: the woes of depression
Hi,Angeldancer,this poem is a mixture of murky outlines that shadow life in so many darkened ways.
Stay true to your sense for writing.
Some of us will be able to comprehend depth of it.
I am sending you many autumnal greetings!
RE: Dreams or reality
Laura, glad you are back.One day dark clouds above your head will be gone and you willsing and dance again. Lily
Remembering
Thank you! All are blessings.RE: Dreams or reality
Abby all your poems are so deeply heart-felt. Cheer up, my Dear Poet. I've been in your shoes, but the best is to come in this reality world once we wake up to challenge it. SM
RE: Remembering
While we still have memories, we should consider it as blessings and be thankful. Beautiful write. SMRE: Dreams or reality
Heartfelt poem Laura,I'm hoping this is past tense and these feelings are now sorted.
Regards Mick.
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RE: Never Forgotten ( My Precious Angel Jessica )
A beautiful dedication to your daughter dear Lilygold. A poem that only a grieving mother could pen. I hope you found some peace in the writing.Regards Mick.
RE: Autumnal Mornings
Nicely written.Autumnal Mornings
Thanks for your kindness.Autumnal Mornings
Thanks ??RE: UNITY!
mend that broken heart.RE: I am garbage
Adje to evacuate your feelings here is a form of healing and if others follow it will help too. Glad this is in your past and have overcome it. We have a blog part in here and may be a good discussion topic to share. SMRE: I am garbage
Adje to evacuate your feelings here is a form of healing and if others follow it will help too. Glad this is in your past and have overcome it. We have a blog part in here and may be a good discussion topic to share. SM
I am garbage
I wrote this poem because I was feeling this way really long time ago. I put this on Facebook and somebody told me that it really helped them so I thought maybe it would help someone on the site.RE: Autumnal Mornings
As the year is turning the darkness and cold can be a bit depressing but the Autumn mornings are crisp and beautiful.Nicely written.
Mick.
RE: Poet to Poet (the next chapter)
Fine display of soulful writing with smart use of methafor Scm. Enjoyed reading.Mick.
RE: Humble Pie
Nicely written Yankee,Life is all about appreciating small blessings and finding contentment therein.
Mick.
Autumnal Mornings
thanks :)
RE: Autumnal Mornings
lovelyRE: East of October
Hi ocean, I defenitely did like your poem. I wouldn't say it's average one... it's quite beautifully written. I enjoyed it. especially "canopy star shifter uplifts the heavens" Lily
RE: Belmont Parade
good haiku Mcradloff) Great you could enjoy the parade . LilyTalk to me
thanks a lot daradloff for your comment. But it's never too late to say or to write what you would wish to say to beloved people. isnt it? Lily Mick , as usually many thanks for your support. sure i will text you very soon. Just a little bit busy time for now. Lily
The Flying Dutchman
Many thanks bollywood for your kind comment. sorry for my late answer.so I give extra 15 minutes of glory to Flying Dutchman
Mother Nature Speaks.
Thank you AutumnChild for your welcome comments.Thanks Lily for your kind visit and your warm words.
Thanks Carlamee for your kind comments.
Thank you Daradloff, Ireland also has many new immigrants.
Regards Mick.